I jumped in to reading this story after loving the red line and wanting to know what was next for the Edward and Bella I fell in love with. Jumping in to a 400K word finished story is no small task and takes a lot of bravery for a slow reader like myself. hehe But! I jumped in and loved it. Seeing their struggles and their passion for each other and their lives was a lovely journey. Thanks for the wild adventure I am sad it's over but loved the ride while it lasted. Oh and during all that slurpee discussions I might have had to go out and get one for myself now and then cause they are pretty addictive but the blue raspberry ones! Cause sorry Edward but those are the best. ;) xo

I loved both the first part and this second one too. I have been reading twilight fics for a long time, but when I read your summary about Edward being an exotic dancer it just didn't sound very good to me. However, I was wondering about all the followers and comments and stuff and I read a couple of the comments of recent readers and that made me give it a chance.
I have to say you did a beautiful work. I loved the fluff, the talks between Dr. Bella and Edward and with Peter too, and the lemons. I must say I skipped some of the reading of the diary about Sir Kevin because it was too much for me.
I loved this second part where I could see it becoming a true story about friendship and support. I am a big girl but I still love happy endings and the good guys beating the bad guys.
thank you for sharing it was beautiful and I really enjoyed it.

You are seriously one of the best fan fiction writers I have ever read. It amazes me that you wrote these so long ago! I'm not sure if you're still actively writing (I hope you are) but I just wanted to say how much I love your stories and your writing style. I hope you write another fan fiction sometime in the future, or let us know where we can find other stories of yours - I would gladly buy your novel if you wrote one :)

You have my gratitude and awe,
A loyal reader

That was hilarious! My kids came running in from the other room I was laughing so loud! Best chapter ever! Seriously, I have tears &my face hurts from laughing.

I thought in red line sir Kevin died as well as Victoria
I also thought Katie was 9 not 7
Even so a great story

Don't know if you still check reviews for this story or not but, this is probably the 12th time I have read it over the years! Super story and so well written! Hope you are being published somewhere! Thanks so much for sharing!️

If there's no repercussions for her than this really is the most fucked up story ever. She sexually assaulted him, you can't give her a pass just cuss she's a woman or you are saying this whole story is a lie and everything Edward went through didn't matter. You can't try to prosecute one for doing something and not the other. If she doesn't get in trouble I'm fine w this story, which will suck cuss I'm enjoying it.

Fantastic story! I loved it!

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I have no idea if you still read the reviews on your works here, so here goes nothing!
Wow! This story was AMAZING! I’m sorry I didn’t leave a review on The Red Line, but I was so eager to start reading the sequel I just didn’t have time for it, can’t blame me for that!
I cried so much during both of the stories. I literally ached for Edward, finding myself things I about his situation at all times of the day. You write so well, and this story feels so... real, I guess.
It feels like at the end it was supposed to say”inspired by a true story” or something. But I don’t know shit about the life of a slave, a hooker, but still!
Thank you so much for sharing this amazing work of yours.

Oh, and I almost forgot to mention how much I LOVED Marcus! I laughed so hard so many times during their talks that at one point my fiancé all but demanded me to tell him what was so fucking funny already and don’t leave him out in the dark about it! Then he had a good laugh too!

So thanks again, for this wonderfully funny, sad, heartbreaking and love filled story!

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Que hermoso fin!
Gracias x escribir
La leí con google traductor y no estuvo mal

Red line y color!
Muy buenas historias!

Essa fanfic e incrivel! Eu estava lendo ela na versao ''Justin'' e sinceramente, voce e incrivel! Essa fanfic e a melhor das melhores.

This entire chapter was disgusting and completely unnecessary.

I read the red line a while ago and loved it but I loved this more. You have a talent and I am so thankful that I got to read these stories. Well done you should feel very proud of yourself. These must have be difficult to write sometime and as a reader you feel Edwards pain, love, heartache etc right along with. Thank you for sharing. I hope you share more of ur talent with us.