Loved your sequel. It was well thought out and well written. I'm really glad you continued the story and we got to see how everyone got on. And there were super dark and disturbing times, as expected, but there are some ridiculously funny chapters. Thank you so much for writing this!

I am really loving this story. I like seeing this part of their lives. Marcus, Peter...all of these new characters are awesome. And awesome Thanksgiving!

OMG, this chapter was HILARIOUS! I laughed out loud so so much. Loved it!

thank you for writing this it was truly amazing and beautifully written

Amazing, Amazing, Amazing! You are one heck of a writer! Thank you! One of the best stories I've read in a long time! Incredible! Thank yoy

I see there's a guest review with the same profile pic as me! Please know I did not write that review! I loved your TRL story and this one as well! Thank you!

LOVE Edwards Dr! This guy is amazing!

That Chapter was hilarious!

Ok - IF they are in witness protection, they could pull strings, get Bella the "credits" on paper... AND NO the school wouldn't know her name was different, that she was from NY ... Do you even do any research before you write... IF in witsec, they would have a cover back story... Your story is missing a big part of reality.

And Edward and Jeanna exchange... Bella and Josh... please don't do that. I can already see you trying to play them as possible love/twist interest. Be better than that, please.

If they are in witsec - witness protection - NO ONE would know their true story, or where they originally come from. So Bob telling Jeanna that Edward/Ant was from New York is a NO NO. They would have a cover story... which you've NOT covered in the least. Come on girl, do your research on important stuff - the shit about horses, so what... that's not essential to the story line.

You obviously don't know the difference between a psychologist and a psychiatrist. A psychiatrist is an MD who went to medical school. Psychologist has a masters and beyond but never attended medical school. They are similar but entirely two different specialties.

So Bella is obviously not a psychiatrist. She should stop saying she is.

I just knew it was gonna happen I just knew it

Ooooo Bellas gonna get jealous

I had to slosh my way through a few things but is was worth it all. I love your story telling thank you for sharing such a powerful concept for humanity.

I fucking hate her wtf she was gonna rape him! And I hate Edward rn for taking the wine it could've had some date rape drug in it and I hate him for talking with her and being nice and trynna make peace