Reviews for Coloring Outside the Lines
saratan182 chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
Noice! so glad you got started on the 2nd part of the red line. i fell in love with that story and i read it twice.

Can't wait to see how this one goes.!

Rodeo Edward oops i mean Anthony...haha.
IgnoranceIsNotBliss chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
Really wasn't expecting a sequel, but it was a really REALLY nice surprise! :D Love it so far :) x
301Francesca1 chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
Thanks God Strippeward is back..or Cowboyward. I loved this ... Thanks for bringing him back. Love to you xxx
NatesMomma chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
Just the other day, I was wondering if your were going to put out the sequel to The Red Line and then this chapter showed up in my inbox! I think I might like Cowboy Edward! This chapter seemed kind of angsty to me, though. I'm a wus. Can you tell me if what edward is going through will get much worse before it gets better?
vamp-luvor-1 chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
great start hun a cowboy huh or should i say a hot cowboy
Bee's Bookshelf chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
OMGoodness! You have absolutely no idea how thrilled & excited I was to see this story in my inbox! I LOVED THE RED LINE so much! I felt so much for that Edward! I did have to do some serious thinking back as to how Tanya, Angela, & Ben fit in cause they were the less significant characters, but once the pieces fell in place...I was drawn right back into Edward's life! I'll be looking forward to chapter 2!



princess1996 chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
i like it
Jasline Devereaux chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
When I saw this is my email, the first thing I wanted to do was kiss you.

I haven't been this excited about reading again in a while!

I'm promising to have an open mind about any direction you decide to take this story. I've always wondered how their lives would go after The Red Line.

Rodeo, huh?


This should suit Edward perfectly!
vihcristina chapter 1 . 11/24/2010

I'm loving the fact that you continue to Fic

you're to be congratulated

his story is incredible

the last chapter of Red Line was the most beautiful thing I've ever read in my life

I'm sure you will not let us down

A big kiss from one of his Brazilian fans
mspacman1 chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
I am sooo excited to see this story start up!
EdwardandBella4everFan chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
Rodeo? WTH is he gonna do at the rodeo? Can he even ride a horse? Maybe he'll be one of the clowns saving the bull riders! lol! Sorry, I couldn't resist! :) Edward is having such a rough time. :(
montannaleigh chapter 1 . 11/24/2010

I cannot express how happy this story makes me! so thrilled you are doing a sequel :)
HopeStreet chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
I was just thinking about your other story about mentally ill vampire Edward the day before this update came into my inbox. I had hoped you would be writing another story soon. I wasn't expecting the sequel till next year at least.

Edward is in a really, really bad place. He NEEDS to talk to someone. He NEEDS therapy like yesterday. His mind is so messed up. I can definitely see how his state of being is going to cause all kinds of strain with all of his relationships. I wish that Victoria could be killed again and again just so that Edward can achieve some kind of peace of mind. It looks like it's going to be a long, hard journey for him. I feel so sad for him.
forsakenleap chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
SOOOO happy ur writing a sequel! I 3 ur stories and I think ur brilliant! so looking forward to the next chapter;)
zkcej chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
omg omg omg i cant believe your back im so so so excited for this!

cant wait to read the rest!


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