|Reviews for Coloring Outside the Lines|
| romeosjuliet14 chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
wow this was amazing. Victoria is a sick monster, that beginning was just horrible, having to read about what Victoria had Katie do uhhhggg!
| VikkiDark chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
Wow! thank you very much, this is such a great story. really looking forward to continuing.
| nikkijoy chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
Rodeo? Geez, poor Edward is in for it huh! I was so excited when I saw you had started the sequel and it didn't disappoint. What a great start. I'm lucky to have only just finished reading TRL so I didnt have to wait as long as everyone else.
Hope things get better for Edward eventually and I can't wait to see what you have in store for him!
| TropicOfCancer chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
I can't believe this! The sequel to one of my favorite stories ever! :D YAY!
This chapter felt real and I'm looking forward to read more.
| lillinna chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
Awesome chapter. :)
| HeartOfDarkess chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
it was only that i stumbled in a fb writers group that i found out you were writing the sequel. and i'm going to be telling everyone that you are! loved the red line...so looking forward to reading this!. now for my comments for this chapter. I liked how you conveyed Edward's fears and anxieties and how the dream sequence at the start reminded us of the horror that was his life with Victoria. Katie's reintroduction into his life, along with going under the witness protection program, adjusting the country living as well as a new job all make for a stressful time for him. It's going to be interesting to read how he'll manage it all. Thanks for starting this...looking forward to the ride!
| MrsJakeBlack chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
SOOOO HAPPPYY THAT YOU MADE A SEQUELL ITS SOOOOOOOO GOOOODDDD
TOTALLY HAVE NO IDEA WHATS GOING ON BUT ITS AWESOMEEEEE
| Elle Nike chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
OMG OMG OMG! Thank you so very much! I knew it wasn't the end yet, but still can't believe it!
TRL is one of my really favourite stories.. amazing.. unbelievable.. incredible.. THANK YOU! and good luck )
impatiently waiting for updates
thank you :)
| java001 chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
that dream... well, what a beginning! only you can do this WS! looking forward to another ecstatic ride with you!
| shaz308 chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
SO IT SOUNDS LIKE HE'S STILL GOING TO BE RIDING SOMETHING! WONDER WHAT HAPPENS IF HE FINDS HE IS GOOD AT RIDING AND ROPING, HE DOESN'T NEED TO BECOME A STAR IN THIS PROFESSION, HE WILL GET NOTICED QUICKLY. I'M SURPRISED HE'S SO WHINY, HIS CHARACTER WAS TOUGHER BEFORE. THANKS FOR THE NEW STORY, LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR NEXT UPDATE.
| L5472 chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
Awww...poor Edward. Hopefully he gets some help and things will be okay :) Now, rodeo eh? *smirks*
Very excited about this! Been waiting a long time for the sequel to start!
| EllaCygnet chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
Interesting start to the sequel, but the chapter would be so much better if you fixed a few issues with your dialog tags.
"The comma goes before the quote tag," Edward reminded WinndSinger.
"And if I end with a question, an exclaimation or a period?" she asked.
"No commas are necessary," Edward answered. "If you're curious about proper punctuation, try to find a similar sentence in a book, the newspaper, or a magazine."
"Thanks, Edward!" she smiled.
| bbbluez chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
So glad you're continuing with these guys!
| edwardcullansbuffy chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
OME! i have waited for this story for so so long and its great so far keep up the good work cant wait for the next chapter.
| sandraev1 chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
Yay I'm so glad you are writing the sequel. Poor Edward indeed he's definently tramatized and needs help with his problems. Maybe doctor Bella can help. Can't wait to the next update with are new cowboy Edward. Thanks for the great writing.