|Reviews for A New Beginning!|
| InvisiblePrincess2002 chapter 4 . 7/5
Nice work! It was terrific seeing Alex so grown-up and truly standing up for herself. I'm glad Annie was willing to admit she was actually wrong about something for once. She could use a little humbling. It's AWESOME seeing Alex get some real respect!
| InvisiblePrincess2002 chapter 3 . 7/5
Well at least Barbara's come to her senses and realizes that Alex saved their lives and that she deserves respect for that. I hope Alex finally gets Danielle Atron once and for all! It's nice to see her growing up and taking some control of her life from selfish control freaks like Annie and Danielle Atron (not that Annie's evil like Danielle, but still, Annie IS a selfish person who treats her sister more like a science project than a human being a lot of the time and doesn't treat her with very much respect.) Personally, I don't really blame her for letting Annie have it in the previous chapter!
| InvisiblePrincess2002 chapter 2 . 7/5
I just want to say that I am PISSED at Barbara and George! (And Annie too for that matter.) Alex ONLY kept her powers a secret from them again at her overbearing sister's suggestion, trying to give them peace of mind so they wouldn't worry about her. On top of that, Alex goes through so much to save their butts and after she rescues them (particularly her father) from death, they treat her like CRAP! I don't feel sorry for George Mack in the slightest. He was a CREEP to his daughter after she saved his life and he brought it on himself!
| spritznar chapter 4 . 6/20/2011
ahaha, when i decided to check for alex mack fanfic i didn't really expect to find anything, let alone something this awesome XD
this made my night, thanks
| LoveLikeElena chapter 4 . 12/17/2010
Hi! I really liked this chapter! Annie and Alex making up was awesome and just like the show! You really redeamed yourself with this chapter. I really enjoyed reading it. I hope to read more from you. I'm glad George is going to be okay. But he doesn't learn his lesson, does he? GOL! You wrote Annie/Alex's relationship perfectly in this chapter and I was really happy. I can't wait to read more from you.
| NightWatcher666 chapter 3 . 12/11/2010
This is quite excellent so far. Keep up the good work.
| LoveLikeElena chapter 3 . 11/30/2010
Hi! I really liked this chapter! I'm glad Alex is going to make up with Annie soon. And Barbara's talk with Annie was awesome as well! I've always liked their mother a lot. I don't think Annie would have that view though. Sure she's a scientist, but she could still have faith in God. I can't wait for more! I got your message. I'm glad you're bringing Ray back! I hope Alex knows what she's doing with Danielle! I'm glad Barbara stood up for Alex.
| LoveLikeElena chapter 2 . 11/29/2010
Hi. I hope you're doing well. Firstly, I wasn't complaining about you changing Annie's first name. I was merely stating that her real first name is Anne. If it hadn't been said in the show, you could use Annet and nobody would have said anything because we wouldn't have known any better. But Annie has a first name and it should be used. That's the last I'll say on the subject.
Anyway, this chapter was really good. The only thing I disagree on is what Alex did to Annie. Alex would NEVER attack her like that! That part almost had me in tears. Yes, she and Annie have verbal fights as seen in many episodes-especially the storm, but Alex would NEVER...she loves her sister too much to hurt her like that! And then to just walk away when Annie needs her help? Other than that, I really did like this chapter. I hope Alex goes back home and straightens everything out with her family soon-Annie especially. Other than Alex uncharacteristically attacking Annie, the verbal exchange they had was right on with the show for the most part.
I also hope George is okay.
I can't wait for more
| LoveLikeElena chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
Hi! I LOVE this new TSWOAM story! I like how you're writing Alex/Annie's relationship. Again, her name is Anne, not Anet. Watch the storm for proof.
Annie: Well, just remember, if it wasn't for me, Alexandra, you wouldn't even be here today. You'd be locked in a cage at the plant!
Alex: Well, if it wasn't for me, Anne, you wouldn't have a life.
Other than that, the story is awesome and I can't wait for more! Too ka leaf out of Deep Water, did you? GOL! It's all good though.
I can't wait for more!