Reviews for Naruto: The Serpent King
RealSterkenburgCranach chapter 2 . 11/26/2016
cool story so far and your naturally gonna need Himiko...i'm looking forward to the next update
METALHELLSPWN chapter 2 . 8/31/2016
please update this or at least make a version that includes the events of warriors orochi three ultimate and probably include Kiyomori Taira as much as I hate the big bastard he has his uses
genesicgaogaigarvsgodgundam chapter 1 . 3/21/2015
nice job
SEEKER452 chapter 2 . 4/30/2012
what find more stories like this but the fox good that funny
Grocamol chapter 2 . 2/17/2011
Wouldn't Kyuubi be willing to help Naruto?

You also have the story jumping to things with people accepting things too easly.

Nice to know some has made a story like this though.
Sir Chris Orr chapter 2 . 1/5/2011
this looks interesting. I personally have considered trying a fic of naruto becoming like orochi but never really got to pin a good enough scenario to make him want to be like that. seems you are the first person to try this sort of thing and I look forward to seeing how it turns out.
Shin-Kai1017 chapter 2 . 12/27/2010
Oh i like it. but will anyone else be involved like the invincible Tadakatsu Honda or the Mighty Lu Bu
jubei zankage chapter 2 . 12/17/2010
Hey, I think you are on to a very good idea with the possibility of hooking up naruto and Da Ji, also i think Kyubi should inlist the mystics (especially Nu Wa mmmmm).

hope to see the next chap soon peace dude
karthik9 chapter 2 . 12/17/2010
it is good chapter
Fayneir chapter 2 . 12/17/2010
Brilliant. Looking forward to more.
Fayneir chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
Brilliant start. I enjoying Warriors Orochi...This is exciting.
Kaiba1288 chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
This is an awesome story you are a very good writer,

Good luck with this & any others you may write.

Looking forward to reading the rest of the story.

Peace & Jah Bless

Revan the Wicked chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
good maby bring back the other containers naruto yugito?