Reviews for Haruu
NobleBoss chapter 23 . 2/13/2011
Aww, this chapter is so sad. The scary part is though that it's so realistic. I hope Numa gets better.
SilverAuraHuntress chapter 25 . 2/13/2011
Oh. My. God. Kix . . . Fives . . . kiss.

WOW, talk about shock. For a second there I just sat there going "Did that just happen?"

No way would I have ever foreseen that. To be honest, it would be very interesting to see were this is going . . .

Make the next chapter longer please, can't wait for it!
NobleBoss chapter 22 . 2/13/2011
I'm behind on the chapters! eek! anyways, yet another steamy chapter, lol very descriptive as well. I enjoyed it but theres not much else to say about it...yea
Jadedsnowtiger chapter 25 . 2/13/2011
interesting... nothing like boy on boy action... i was waiting for it and now I see it. Happy dance!
Jadedsnowtiger chapter 23 . 2/11/2011
Very beautiful, i had been wondering about Numa.
jaguar101 chapter 23 . 2/11/2011
that was a good chapter! i would like to hear more about Numa!
SilverAuraHuntress chapter 23 . 2/11/2011
That certainly was a very in depth chapter. I'm glad that you're showing that it's not just the clones who are growing up, but also the children like Shaeeah and Numa.

At first the thought of Numa marrying Waxer and Boil was kinda weird, but now I can sorta understand it. I mean she even calls them "Nerra" not "Father". They are not even her biological brothers so it would be okay for her to marry them.

As usual, waiting impatiently for the next chapter!
Tess'ika chapter 21 . 2/10/2011
nice
BelleDomia Anastatia chapter 43 . 2/8/2011
We is begging. Please do something Jesse! Our heart grieves for him.

Could you do something for Edge as well plz?
SilverAuraHuntress chapter 43 . 2/8/2011
*fans herself* whew! was that steamy or what?

I can't think of anyone at the moment to go with Col and Ahsoka, maybe something will come to me later.

Now please excuse me while I go torture Jester for not getting together with Saria before she found others. What a stubborn dumbass.
jaguar101 chapter 44 . 2/8/2011
good chapter
Jadedsnowtiger chapter 44 . 2/8/2011
God that was beautiful.
Jadedsnowtiger chapter 43 . 2/6/2011
Oddly enough i liked this- it worked out quite well.
LostLyra chapter 43 . 2/6/2011
Hmmmm, interesting. I like how you've written it with Sheesha's point of view? Perhaps more Quad/Sheesha? Just wondering how old would Sheesh be at this point? Please update soon! LL
jaguar101 chapter 43 . 2/6/2011
NICE!1
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