Reviews for Promise
YalenaMoon chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
...And now I'm crying... ANNABETH I'M GOING TO SLAP YOU!
crazyreader95 chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
luvd it! Apart frm the few grammatical mistakes and typos... anyhow it was amazing!
The Future Is Unwritten chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
Wow, this is touching - it's why I love Luke! Uber-good job! I really like your take on that sad part!

- SuperWriterGirl97 of The Future Is Unwritten
twi-fic luver chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
It was so realistic.

My heart felt his pain.
awesome4evah chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
I like how used LUKE'S point of view, it kind of put an entirely new twist on the percy jackson series.
smilerg98 chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
That did NOT suck! That was actually really good!

I loved the raw emotion you conveyed in this. It felt like you could actually feel Luke dying, his last thoughts.

I loved the line where he asks Annabeth if he loved her and his heart broke. Gah. That was amazing.

I also loved the ending, with the word Annabeth had written across his heart.

One thing though, though this was a very emotional fic, I would focus more on (I'm going to sound like an elementary school teacher) showing, not telling. In other words, focusing more on description rather than dialogue.

There were also some typos and grammatical errors, but hey, no one's perfect.

Besides all this, I absolutely adored this! (Does that make me sound sadistic? Meh.)
Iiidog5 chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
:3 I absolutely love this! Luke is my favorite character too 3
lovetoread1998 chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
very touching