|Reviews for Sins|
| Chely99 chapter 14 . 3/27
I happened to stumble across your stories and even went to your blog to read them. I have enjoyed them because the crime plots are exciting. Plus, you paired Olivia with Alex!
The only thing I seem to not be able to get over is your characterization of Olivia. The Olivia that I have watched on my screen for nearly 20 years would NEVER allow a minor to work on a case where the child is viewing child pornography. She would NEVER allow her underaged ward have a boyfriend sleep over where she knows they are having sex. Yes, young people have sex, but Olivia would not allow her child to have their boyfriend sleep over in the guest room knowing that he’d end up in her daughter’s room. Olivia doesn’t seem to have a backbone when it comes to Jess. Yes, she starts out putting her foot down, but always ends up apologizing when Jess throws a temper tantrum. On a side note, Alex would never allow another person, let alone a 16 year old to read her case files.
With all that said, I am enjoying these stories. They are well written and intriguing. I appreciate that you share them with us. I just had to say something about the characterization of Olivia because as I read all 4 stories, it’s like a burr in my saddle.
I’d read more of this pairing if you ever decide to start writing more for them. I can deal with a burr. ;)
| peterpeter chapter 14 . 7/31/2011
i finaly finish reading this fic. i loved and now going to read salvation. can't wait to see what happens. great job
| Swampje chapter 14 . 5/14/2011
Thank you so much for this story, it is amazing, just like the rest of the series. I will be looking forward to another part in the future!
| VikkiT chapter 14 . 4/24/2011
Wow! Another amazing update and sexy too! Please continue!
| cam101 chapter 14 . 4/21/2011
OMG! YOU MUST UPDATE THIS SOON! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!
| junebuggnc chapter 14 . 4/21/2011
I've been a fan since the beginning. Can't wait for the next installment and how Jess & Richard's clubbing will come to light.
| girlnextdoor15 chapter 14 . 4/20/2011
This was an awesome ride, looking forward to next installment!
| Jaadde chapter 14 . 4/20/2011
Intense. Update soon.
| juicetroop82 chapter 14 . 4/20/2011
A cliffhanger ending now I really will have to read the next installment. Cant wait. Plz update soon.
| lizzy43 chapter 14 . 4/20/2011
I've really enjoyed reading this story. Sorry I've not done a good job of reviewing but things have been crazy lately, but I've definitely been reading. Looking forward to the next installment!
| chawkchic chapter 14 . 4/20/2011
Fabulous and now I'm anxiously awaiting Salvation.
| kleberm chapter 14 . 4/20/2011
I have followed all of the installments of this story and I will continue to until you complete it. I am looking forward to your next installment and I am sure it will be as greatly written as the rest have been, keep up the great writing.
| NinaGina chapter 13 . 4/17/2011
Can't wait for the next chapter!
| juicetroop82 chapter 13 . 4/6/2011
Im so glad its nothing serious with Jess. Although i think it would be interesting if maybe jim Steele stopped by while all three of them were at there home. Plz update soon.
| svu4u09 chapter 13 . 4/5/2011
amazing update! I am so glad Jess is ok! Update soon please! :) :) :)