Reviews for Allegiance
crazyhpcfan chapter 9 . 1/13/2015
Such an amazing story. I really liked how you wrote this; it was nice to see how Team Mustang was formed one by one.

Thank you for writing this.
She Just Lit It Up chapter 1 . 11/10/2014
This story was fantastic, perfect, great ... ugh, everything
I'm so honoured to be able to read it & am glad there are writers like you that can capture the essence of these characters in such a beautiful way
Laws of Chaos chapter 9 . 10/21/2014
Absolutely amazing- I am literally lost for words to describe the sheer amount of *feels* you put in this piece.
Windy Silvermist chapter 9 . 10/15/2014
I love this. So so much. Thank you.
waddiwasiwitch chapter 9 . 10/15/2014
This was absolutely wonderful. Thanks for the great read.
waytheballbounces chapter 9 . 9/21/2014
Damn. Just damn.

This story is so amazing.

No words.




Team Mustang is amazingness

This story is amazingness

Royai is amazingness

And the fact that this story is over is totally not amazingness
LCextrordinaire chapter 9 . 9/19/2014
Holy... This story though... I love it. I just freaking love it. It gave such an amazing insight to Roy and each of his subordinates. This is amazing. Well worth my favorite.
Jaypool chapter 9 . 9/8/2014
This is an excellent story.
Thank you for writing! :D
Unleash The Shadow chapter 9 . 7/13/2014
This story gave me shivers when I finished it. It was so in character that I consider this canon tbh. The gen and romance were so perfectly balanced (something that only someone with true skill can do in this fandom) that they never took away from the essence of the story. I love Mustang's team.

Thank you!
Ba-sing-saying chapter 9 . 7/10/2014
I've been on an FMA fanfiction kick, going back and rereading all my favorite fics, and I just have to say that I loved this so very much. You delved so deep into these characters and their relationships with each other and especially with Roy and tied it all together beautifully. I know it might seem like old news now but just so you know, there are still people reading it and falling in love with it. Keep writing!
Anon chapter 3 . 7/2/2014
This is by far, the best Fullmetal Alchemist fanfic i have ever read. Breda is my favorite charater, and this was just an awesome story. You get a cookie.
Skynote chapter 3 . 6/27/2014
Daw, Mustang's jealousy! And I loved the drinking contest, love how you wrote Breda's character :)
Skwrl chapter 9 . 5/8/2014
This is perfection. One of the best FMA fics that I've ever read. Thank you so much for creating and sharing this masterpiece!
Toki Asamia chapter 1 . 5/6/2014
Great beginning! That dynamic between Mustang and Havoc is awesome. And that screaming match just awesome - no pun intended. XD
Ba-sing-saying chapter 9 . 4/13/2014
This is fantastic. I know it must seem old to you now but having just read it, I'm kind of elated. It's not every day you run into a fic of this caliber. You really tied all the characters together at a level that I hadn't thought of before, especially with the characters whose backstories didn't make it into the canon, like Fuery and Breda. Awesome job. Thank you very much for writing this.
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