Reviews for Moment of Impact |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. The pacing is just right, no unnecessary dilly-dallying. A hurt and comfort and found family story so well-written. Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god, I am so glad that I had finished my coffee before reading this chapter or I probably would have had to use something to get coffee out of my sinus! Too funny! I hope Harry calls him and impetuous Gryffindor, or that Severus is absorbing some of Harry’s Gryffindor qualities, lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() please tag this story as hurt/comfort. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dad? Harry calls Snape dad now? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this! And Snape lived! I never understood why they didn’t try to save Snape in the books or the movie. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol. Snape and Pomfrey teasing Harry about the hair on his upper lip. I thought he ad gotten a tattoo or something. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ginny kissed Harry! Yay! Loved that they played mini golf and Dumbledore and McGonagall transfigured things into mini golf clubs and golf balls. And McGonagall is Harry’s guardian! Now that is something many fics don’t do. It’s either Snape or someone else. I like the change. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the Red Sox! Harry has a Red Sox hat! Nice! Uh, Harry knew he was made quidditch captain during the chapter of his surprise birthday. Did Harry forget? |
![]() ![]() ![]() McGonagall totally knows what Lily’s Patronus was. And why did she lie? |
![]() ![]() ![]() It’s only been a week? Does Harry know that Snape has to keep up appearances for Voldemort? |
![]() ![]() ![]() What was Harry thinking about when he looked at the jar? And Snape said Harry’s name! I wish these chapters were longer. But good so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like that Snape is giving Harry a chance and Harry is doing the same. Can Ron, Hermione, and Ginny firecall Harry? I’m sure a fireplace under the Fidelius Charm can’t be tracked by the ministry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love that Snape is so concerned. Can’t wait for Umbitch to be put in Azkaban! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol. Snape is melting. First he laughed when Harry involuntarily took a step towards the cottage, and now the corner of his mouth twitched when Harry asked his question. I love that Snape food Harry he was friends with Lily. So Bill and Fleur live in Shell Cottage during the war. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn. Harry’s being separated again? Why can’t his friends come with him? Ugh. |