XD hahaha this was great

Plus Bruce is Terry's father

I like this a lot. Very nice.

Aw! This is adorable! I absolutely loved it! Thank you so much for posting this! *glomp*

lolz :P

Cute and sweet... These two have such wonderful chemistry together. 3 :)

I really liked it - you could probably even do a series of oneshots with Max and Terry (Max is kinda butch so it /almost/ yaoi lol). Max's thoughts were so believable, I loved it. It could totally be cannon for all we know XD hope you do more of these someday.

You could look at it this way. Max is practically one of the guys. Actually, it's probably more that Terry's one of the girls, but I digress.

I like it, hope you do more stuff with BB.

You may like YAOI more but you are bloody good at writing het! I really liked this! Please don't leave it as a one shot! There is so much scope for development (and more semi-naked Terry!) I hope this is enough to appease the sentinels - being destroyed would really ruin my day.

xXx

Love Terry and Max fluff. :) Glad these two are getting more good writers like yourself.

This was a great fluff, what are you talking about! LOL! I can't see Terry with a guy...I don't not my type of thing. But, as your have placed your story, Terry and Max is where it's at! Heheh!

Oh God, I don't want the Sentinels to destroy me so I'd better review.

'I mean, do you see this?" He pulls the blankets aside a little to reveal a disgusting yellow and green mottled bruise on his hip. But Max has never seen a naked boy's hip before, and is kind of fascinated.'

This actually caused a 20-second out loud bout of giggles from me. Honestly, I loved this piece. It was just long enough to be enjoyable, fun, and in character but short enough that I still wanted more. I really love how you wrote their relationship and I hope you decide to write more for them because you seem to have a knack for it, and that's coming from an old broad who's been writing this 'ship forever. Keep it up!

Very nice work. Your plot and setting were strengthened by your strong writing skills. I enjoyed myself, good story.

this was really cute!

good job!

more fluff please. i like this kind of terry