Reviews for Sleep
Sabi2 chapter 1 . 12/8/2016
XD hahaha this was great
TMAngel chapter 1 . 8/29/2016
Plus Bruce is Terry's father
Aronim chapter 1 . 6/2/2015
I like this a lot. Very nice.
Vampire Queen chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
Aw! This is adorable! I absolutely loved it! Thank you so much for posting this! *glomp*
Ele Goddess of Elements chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
lolz :P
AniGirl 7 chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
Cute and sweet... These two have such wonderful chemistry together. 3 :)
Inali Grimalkin chapter 1 . 12/25/2010
I really liked it - you could probably even do a series of oneshots with Max and Terry (Max is kinda butch so it /almost/ yaoi lol). Max's thoughts were so believable, I loved it. It could totally be cannon for all we know XD hope you do more of these someday.
Kasune chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
You could look at it this way. Max is practically one of the guys. Actually, it's probably more that Terry's one of the girls, but I digress.

I like it, hope you do more stuff with BB.
Franklymydear11 chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
You may like YAOI more but you are bloody good at writing het! I really liked this! Please don't leave it as a one shot! There is so much scope for development (and more semi-naked Terry!) I hope this is enough to appease the sentinels - being destroyed would really ruin my day.

xXx
dispatcher652 chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
Love Terry and Max fluff. :) Glad these two are getting more good writers like yourself.
BlaqueEssence chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
This was a great fluff, what are you talking about! LOL! I can't see Terry with a guy...I don't not my type of thing. But, as your have placed your story, Terry and Max is where it's at! Heheh!
Kyoko Kasshu Minamino chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
Oh God, I don't want the Sentinels to destroy me so I'd better review.

'I mean, do you see this?" He pulls the blankets aside a little to reveal a disgusting yellow and green mottled bruise on his hip. But Max has never seen a naked boy's hip before, and is kind of fascinated.'

This actually caused a 20-second out loud bout of giggles from me. Honestly, I loved this piece. It was just long enough to be enjoyable, fun, and in character but short enough that I still wanted more. I really love how you wrote their relationship and I hope you decide to write more for them because you seem to have a knack for it, and that's coming from an old broad who's been writing this 'ship forever. Keep it up!
CWolf2 chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
Very nice work. Your plot and setting were strengthened by your strong writing skills. I enjoyed myself, good story.
hi chapter 1 . 11/25/2010
this was really cute!

good job!

more fluff please. i like this kind of terry