Reviews for The Dance
Lord Divestre Croft chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
My dear chere,

Wonderful and romantic. A little cliche-ish, but good nonetheless. However, I'm happy that I'm alone again... because now, I can be your beta-reader once more. I detect minor hints of grammatic errors and the pacing of the story is a little off.

Besides that, it's a good one-shot, and it will must definitely tide us over.
cheeriolord chapter 1 . 11/25/2010
thanks for this fic it's a cracking little fluffy piece of what should be

cookies18 chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
This is so beautifully written. Looking forward to reading more stories from you~! ()b
cloudlover2989 chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
very nice
vLuna chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
OMG Karmi! *dies* You totally surprised me! Thank you for the dedication :) *hugs* I really love this fic (and the picture you based it on xD); it was sweet and fluffy and really heart-warming. There's only one thing I would add to this piece...a proper kiss :P But I still loved the ending :) Thanks again!
mom calling chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
I think I see where this is going, and I'm glad. I love when they get past all their baggage and, by hook or by crook, declare themselves to each other. And suspenders! Great idea! thx, BPMK. mc