Reviews for Hooked
Niwa99 chapter 8 . 3/31
I loved the story
Coneasss chapter 1 . 8/3/2017
This is phenomenal. Truly.
WhitePurity chapter 8 . 6/25/2017
This is by far the best story I've ever read. The emotions and actions from the characters had so much realism and was beliveable. It amazes me how you fit that entire story in only eight chapters with a beginning, middle, and end. I usually dont waste my time in reveiwing stories and its very rare that a story is good enough for me to do so. So this should let you know that this was a VERY good story, and thanks for sharing it with us.
S.H.E.N.K.A.I.N.000 chapter 8 . 7/13/2015
That was awesome
pinkypiejr12 chapter 8 . 7/18/2014
Awesome story, you successfully made me scream at the characters, laugh so hard I thought I was gonna puke, and cry (and say Aww a lot). You are really good at this. I loved this story so much.
JERUSALEM's Bride chapter 8 . 5/4/2014
so I loved your story. it was awesome and sad and funny and JET. but I couldn't find it on mebby its because I have absolutely no experience with that site... actually that's definitely why, but anyways! do you think you could send me the link? cuz I really wanna read the rest of it. plzzzzzzzzz
k thx bai
g3njutsu chapter 2 . 3/28/2014
This is really well written.
MADStar529 chapter 8 . 2/12/2014
Great story!
LitDragonWagon chapter 8 . 3/5/2013
Wow! This is the first avatar fanfiction I've ever read, and I am honestly slapping myself and wondering why I never tried these before. This was awesome! The drama, the romance, the all fit together beautifully! And I like that you managed to not kill off Jet. I always hated that part in the show. I felt like he didn't deserve to die after changing the way he did. Two thumbs waaaay way up for a well done fic!
Rose Avington chapter 8 . 12/30/2012
I would have said best jetko out of the hundreds i read onlybif you realized that fanfiction wouldhave kept the story even with the lemmons
KnowlingGirl chapter 8 . 7/13/2012
I guess you could say i was HOOKED on this story!...Get it...because it's your ...Title...
well, I thought that was funny -_-'.
Anyway, I loved this story. Only 8 chapters and I cried when Jet was hurt and couldn't get over Zuko. You're a very skill-full writer. I hope to read more stories, and your stories, like this in the future
Ruby of Raven chapter 8 . 5/26/2012
Wow! I loved it! It was just all so amazing! Great job with everything! ;)
ABundleOfDaydreams chapter 8 . 12/28/2011
YeahYouWannaKnowMyName chapter 8 . 11/11/2011
For a second I thought Mai had married Aang when you said he always smiles... Yeah, I was like, "WHOA! Hold on there. I did not see that coming. There was no hints or anything." and was really freaking out because I normally catch on to those things, lol. Then I noticed you didn't mention any names and about went boneless in relief that I wasn't losing my touch, heh.

I am amazed at how thought out you made this. And it's only 8 chapters, but it feels like I just read a really good novel. I mean, I tend to read novels (as in paperback 2 in thick size 8 font novels) in the time span of an hour if it is only mildly amusing. But this story took me HOURS. It was like I had to soak up every word or I'd miss a pharagragh. It's rare that I come across a read like that, and makes me rediculously happy :D

Your Jet was really complex and fun to follow as he jumped from his emotions in each scene and chapter. The way you set up the character developement to fit around certain timeframes? Brilliant. I am seriously dazzled by this story, but at this point you prolly think I'm over flattering you (which I am sooo not doing). So how about we end this with I really appreciate you sharing this story.

Muglib chapter 8 . 8/1/2011
Loved this story. I think for the most part reading it through without the lemony bits did a lot fo me. I like you writing style, such a nice change from unnecessarily convoluted pieces. Kudos
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