Reviews for slow down the music and turn up the volume
SpecialPikachu chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
cool story
H3art Star chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
Oh it very interesting and engaging

I really love your writing style.

tempus terere chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
Interesting piece, although I think the summary is somewhat misleading. I don't see their hearts breaking five times.

Also, thisthisthis is annoying and doesn't really accomplish much, most of the time. Sorry, it's just my personal opinion.

Other than that, it was an enjoyable, if a little dramatic read. :)
Brai chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
It was a quiet piece—yet very powerful. It created a mental picture of longing. I think that intensity was built phenomenally by your succinct writing style.

It was very enjoyable. Well done.
Lucy Ash Hawthorne chapter 1 . 11/24/2010