Reviews for Percabeth Cinderella
Guest chapter 13 . 11/24/2014
Sorry for my saying so but... U REALLY need to work on ur writing skills 1. Ur grammar is really bad like saying are instead or our 2. Spelling is awful like thou instead of though and 3. The story in general isn't very interesting oh wait another is EXTREMLY short chapters... Ull need to work on that. I'm not insulting ur skills or anything it's just that I think with better of the above and more I and probably at least some other people people would find this story MUCH more interesting
I'm sry if I'm insulting u in any way but I think I would really enjoy ur stories with better content
Calypso and Lionfish chapter 13 . 4/23/2014
hey i think the story is pretty good but i found errors in spelling and grammar alot so if u want somebody to proof-read or give you ideas just PM me n icbet it will be fun workin wid u
Cutelolistar chapter 13 . 4/7/2014
Update
LaFangirl13 chapter 13 . 11/2/2013
You should make the stories longer, also maybe annabeth found her mom and she is rich like Poseidon
kisses chapter 13 . 8/18/2013
Please update! I love this story!
OceanBlueSeaEyes chapter 13 . 7/28/2013
please continue
MaybeYou'llGetIt.MaybeYouWon't chapter 13 . 7/10/2013
Good story *claps hands like a retarded seal* Now. Write. More. And. No. One. Gets. Hurt.
artemis7448 chapter 13 . 4/4/2013
i like it but make th chapters a little longer and you're good
SilentSpell chapter 13 . 4/4/2013
Wow...
( you took forever!)
Belgrath chapter 13 . 4/3/2013
Update asap oh n may I suggest longer chapters fewer yes but more substence instead of shorter chapters ? Love ur story!
Guest chapter 13 . 4/3/2013
I like your story, and i mean it. But there is only one measly problem.
Heres the problem: YOUR CHAPTERS ARE TOO SHORT. Lol, sorry if that was harsh. But it's the truth! I mean, you only have 5k words for 13 chapters! So, my suggestion is to maybe make your chapters at least 1000 words per chapter? Like, I get really into the story, and it ends...so...yeah...
Anyway, i really, really, REALLY like your story so please update soon and make your chapters more detailed and longer? Thanks for writing! :)
ballerinagirl716 chapter 12 . 3/28/2013
really its been 3 years
SilentSpell chapter 12 . 2/28/2013
Good luck,update soon :)
SilentSpell chapter 11 . 2/28/2013
Haha Rachel ,:) ,wow Poseidon is being a jerk
SilentSpell chapter 10 . 2/28/2013
Dun duuun duuuuuuuuun
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