Reviews for Percabeth Cinderella
Guest chapter 1 . 6/2
I can see where the plot is going but the spelling needs to improve overall it's a great start
HayleyHope16 chapter 1 . 8/18/2015
Um... Spell Check.. OR Beta.
Other than that it was great.
Guest chapter 13 . 5/26/2015
No offense but this sucks and is to NO OFFENSE!But other than that it's great!
elizabeth ann chapter 1 . 4/2/2015
It wasn't that good I would make it a little longer.
Awesome person chapter 9 . 3/27/2015
It's good I really like it I just think it would have been cool if he searched a little longer. Mabey she could text him with an account of wisegirl?
Guest chapter 6 . 3/27/2015
Naw! I love it!
Guest chapter 3 . 3/27/2015
Okay so it's been a long time sine you've written this considering I reading and it's 2015 I think if you re-read it now you could easily fix up some mistakes. The only thing that confused me was this last paragraph and you said buy instead of by
Guest chapter 13 . 11/24/2014
Sorry for my saying so but... U REALLY need to work on ur writing skills 1. Ur grammar is really bad like saying are instead or our 2. Spelling is awful like thou instead of though and 3. The story in general isn't very interesting oh wait another is EXTREMLY short chapters... Ull need to work on that. I'm not insulting ur skills or anything it's just that I think with better of the above and more I and probably at least some other people people would find this story MUCH more interesting
I'm sry if I'm insulting u in any way but I think I would really enjoy ur stories with better content
Calypso and Lionfish chapter 13 . 4/23/2014
hey i think the story is pretty good but i found errors in spelling and grammar alot so if u want somebody to proof-read or give you ideas just PM me n icbet it will be fun workin wid u
Cutelolistar chapter 13 . 4/7/2014
Update
LaFangirl13 chapter 13 . 11/2/2013
You should make the stories longer, also maybe annabeth found her mom and she is rich like Poseidon
kisses chapter 13 . 8/18/2013
Please update! I love this story!
OceanBlueSeaEyes chapter 13 . 7/28/2013
please continue
MaybeYou'llGetIt.MaybeYouWon't chapter 13 . 7/10/2013
Good story *claps hands like a retarded seal* Now. Write. More. And. No. One. Gets. Hurt.
artemis7448 chapter 13 . 4/4/2013
i like it but make th chapters a little longer and you're good
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