Reviews for Surprise
ASL-Pirates-Lover chapter 9 . 3/14/2014
AWWW! i am sad it is the ending but happy that Sandra did not yell at Kev and Carl punch Kev multiple times like in another book i read (crazy sounding book right!)
ASL-Pirates-Lover chapter 8 . 3/14/2014
That cake sounds awesome! Wow i am suprised Kev can cook. This is SO a dun dun dun duh moment! I wonder what Benji's parents- i mean Sandra and Carl will say?!
ASL-Pirates-Lover chapter 4 . 3/14/2014
oh wow Benji that pic taking is so wrong to do cause ur basically torching Kev, but so funny! XD
ASL-Pirates-Lover chapter 3 . 3/14/2014
lolz how could Benji kill Kev he is to small and i
ASL-Pirates-Lover chapter 1 . 3/14/2014
really Kev its ur bed time! XD 2 funny!
ASL-Pirates-Lover chapter 7 . 12/11/2013
lolz
ASL-Pirates-Lover chapter 6 . 12/11/2013
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ASL-Pirates-Lover chapter 5 . 12/11/2013
i totally agree with u on Gwen!
ASL-Pirates-Lover chapter 2 . 12/11/2013
Lolz u said feedback one of Ben's new aliens XD
Enterprising Voyager chapter 9 . 5/19/2013
I thought this was a really (I dislike the word cute; but I don't know what else to call it) little story. Now that Ben's parents (excuse me,Carl and Sandra), know; you should write something about how B & K are going to break the news to Gwen and Julie, not to mention Max. And the awkward meter goes up another notch;)
Hetaliafan chapter 9 . 5/10/2012
Or he gets a new alien that shapeshifts or just so happens to make him look like a girl...
Hetaliafan chapter 9 . 5/10/2012
Ben pregnant. :D its happened before anyway...
MANGAMANIAC666 chapter 5 . 12/24/2011
I really enjoy this cute story so far! :D And Im actually glad someone despises Gwen like I do! I like her at first but once I saw her again, she was unbelievebly annoying! (since Im more into yaoi)
FlyingFyreFlye chapter 9 . 4/29/2011
Hehe, this was really good. Kevin and Ben are so cute together!

It would have been really good if you had a chapter with Gwen's reaction in it though... _
X-INACTIVE chapter 9 . 4/5/2011
Amazing job as always. I loved this story. It was great because it used a roundabout plot line to keep you interested. Loved it!~

~Thomas~
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