Reviews for Mess of Me
chocoholic22 chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
Best opening chapter EVER!
CheapNovelty chapter 3 . 3/10/2011
I like how in this story Fitz isn't the typical douchebag/asshole that makes it easy to root for Eli. Here they're both genuinely good guys and you really don't know who you want to win (But I'm still totally for Eli)
CheapNovelty chapter 15 . 2/3/2011
OOOOOOOOOHHH MAAAAANNN! Talk about intense! Really enjoyed this story and although I'm up for a little Flare drama I practically started dancing when it ended as Eclare. Fitz better watch himself though, I don't know how much more of this I can take! Look forward to the sequel
I-belong-to-AFC891 chapter 9 . 1/16/2011
oh my this story is sooo delicious. Everytime Eli catches Clare with Fitz I shake in pleasure. hahaha
Soldier's Girl 27 chapter 15 . 1/11/2011
OOh!..jealousy..can this story get any better?..I can't wait for the next chapter!..Update soon! :)
famouslastturd chapter 15 . 1/11/2011
that was awesome! i hope there will bea sequel :D
Bandito Sun chapter 15 . 1/11/2011
you can't end the story like that and not have a sequel!

Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!

But in all seriousness, this was a very good fic.
WaitCait705 chapter 15 . 1/11/2011
sequel! ) but i loved the ending! ) It was perfect!
tng2788 chapter 15 . 1/11/2011
I smell a sequel!

Pleaseeee, you need to write a sequel.
ButterballBabe chapter 15 . 1/11/2011
Awesome story i enjoyed reading it the ending was awesome but it would be awesome if you did a sequel to this i really want to see how things work out between Eli Clare and Fitz
imoddsandends chapter 15 . 1/10/2011
Haha I kept chuckling everytime someone popped up at the table :P and woah I actually was not expecting an ending like that! A sequel would be great of course, but hoepfully she still ends up with Eli? ;)
xFallingUp chapter 15 . 1/10/2011
I love this story. I hope you do the sequel!
TheWayToGo chapter 15 . 1/10/2011
I loved the epilogue. I really hope you do a sequel. This story was incredible and I can't wait for anything else you write.

Keep doing what you're doing. :)
RachRox12 chapter 15 . 1/10/2011
You should do a sequel. I love this story.
Lady Azura chapter 15 . 1/10/2011
Well, with an ending like that, you HAVE to do a sequel now!

You can't just leave me hanging like this! I demand more! :P
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