|Reviews for Burning baby's breathe|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
please update soon..please make lum&babs really romantic and make them a story to themselves!
| Erik-is-my-angel1234 chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
Great story so far really looking forward to Reading rest update soon please
| Fizzy Starburst chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
Very interesting. It sounds like a really good idea, I can't wait for an update :D
| Answer chapter 1 . 12/8/2010
I like the idea and this opening and I think this deserves to get some more reviews, but I think it would help if you got a beta to go through and check for spelling and grammar errors, because I think that might be what's putting people off. The title doesn't make sense - I assume it's meant to be Baby's Breath, like the flower?
Anyway, like I said, I really like this idea and I'm interested to see where you take it from here!