Reviews for Springtime Daydreams
Amanda-san chapter 2 . 12/13/2010
This chapter is packed with tantalizing details foreshadowing things to come.
Amanda-san chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
This chapter is very captivating. I really like it a lot. I can't wait to follow their trip into the day dreams.

There was one part that was a hard transition for me to follow. After describing the day dream rules, you wrote, "Dina hadn't really paid attention to all this, she had simply jumped into the adventure without waiting for Haru." Then you jump back to the present. I needed some connection to join the past to the present.
FlyingSophisa chapter 2 . 12/8/2010
Hi Yonet! I think your story is really good. 100 times good. And, knowing the human you, I have to disagree with you with the maturity. But only sometimes. For a person who hasn't read Dragon Drive, it might be confusing and fast paced, so slow down, please! Still, it's sugooi.
ME chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
This was what was wrong: everything i hated it (just kidding it was awesome, keep writing although you need to make it a little clearer the day dream manga stuff (what's happening with that.)
Sebastian chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
It was good. NOW WRITE MORE! NAOW!
katya chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
its all right but kinda hard to follow sometimes

way too short. want more!