Reviews for Intervention
alexandria95 chapter 1 . 11/21/2013
oh my heart is breaking... everybody easily forget to respect Finn. I love this. thanks for good writing.
Linneagb chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
Eating disorders sure are scary stuff, no less missunderstood. A really good oneshot
TVTime chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
Oh dear, I expected him to get help at the end. Very compelling, good job.
Ghostly Green chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
This was a truly interesting look at what could have happened after the Rocky Horror episode - horrifying, sad, and I wish it could have been finished, some AU where eventually someone notices and everything can become better for poor Finn. Not something cliched and over-done, of course, but still. The bit towards the end, where he says, "Is this an intervention, or..." and it goes off with his personal thoughts really hit hard, as did the part where he was hoping that Carol would notice that something was wrong and would come racing up after him and help him - it doesn't happen like that in real life, and you kept it as realistic as possible. Lovely job on such a tough subject, if only it weren't already complete!

- Ammi
tic tac toe 03 chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
Aww poor Finn really well written and can't wait for

more

Tacxxx
d for delete me chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
Oh my God...

No one realized! I love myself some Finn angst. Awesome job.
4everablackrose chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
POOR FINN!
tj chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
poor finn. everybody is to busy to even notice him:(

I loved this story
theAkuRokuFaNaTiC chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
Now I'm sad! Aw, Finn, you're awesome just the way you are!

Oh my goodness, that was awesome! And the way you made it fit in with the storyline was superb! But I'm scared because you left it on a kinda creepy note. Can you, like, make a sequel or something? Please?
Emily chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
Perfect.
goblz chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
...

*jaw drop*

My heart just broke reading this. (That's good news for you, because you did a great job writing this!)

I'm always on the hunt for Finn whump and/or angst. I can't seem to find much. Love this, though! Definitely satisfying to my whump hunger.
Emma CS Me chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
GAZHABA FINN! Poor baby. I... honestly feel like I should have noticed the implications of that line before I actually did, given how much I angst-whore Finn out, but w/e. Anyway, *really* well-done. You really got into his head and made his actions seem in character. The idea of it just *hurts*, and it's interesting to see how he *slowly* realizes what's up, and that he needs help. And then he's all disappointed in the end... *awww*. Also, Sam: NOT HELPING. STOP ENABLING HIM.

*fave'd*
justme75742 chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
wow. this was written so well. I can totally relate to Finn in this cause I was the same way a year ago. You made this very realistic.
cocopuffz chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
This broke my heart. /3

In a good way, though! I was waiting for someone to fill this prompt out, and I'm so happy you did. Your writing style is amazing, and you put so much emotion into the story, even though the story didn't have a lot of dialogue.

Really, great job. :)
GingerGleek chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
Ohmigoodness! This was so amazing, so sad, so wonderfully done :( Made me really feel for him. So hope there's a sequel or something where people DO figure it out ... but even by itself this is spectacular!
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