Reviews for Rhythm
basil and dill chapter 1 . 6/10/2015
The rhythm of the story is fantastic - makes you feel like you're running and breathing with her.
Nice skills! :)
theregoesnash chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
this is beautiful. "post-people, pre-people world"- i love that. you're a really talented writer and i think you caught this moment perfectly. sophie was one of my favorite characters and i was sad that zusak didn't dwell on her longer...thanks for doing it for him :)
CrazyCousinEiko chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
This was really good. Thank you for writing this in present tense! So many people (there are, what, five other fics of this book in English?) write these in past tense, and it just doesn't work. I love how you feel in the moment with Sophie. You did a great job keeping them in character. ;)
Matt chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
Should have left this at school. Try starting with a good story, then make it clever.
Scytherian Poetry chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
Nice work! Sophie wasn't in the book all that much, not really much more than one chapter, but I found her particular 'Message' to be the most meaningful. Thanks for making a somewhat unnoticed character more noticeable (again)!