Reviews for If At First
KrisEleven chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
Awesome! I loved the voice you used here, it was really great for bringing images out of the work, and bringing in Beka and those ties worked really well.

I am completely obsessed with the darker side of George that people seem to completely forget about, so this was an excellent find for me. Especially since you wrote him and his interactions with his world so well. I loved the way you described him in the last couple paragraphs! Great word choice there.