|Reviews for Vengeance|
| Phygmalion chapter 16 . 6/28/2011
Brilliant! I hope that you have plans to finish this, because it definately deserves it! :D
| PadawanMage chapter 16 . 3/6/2011
I still only have the Dwarves and Dalish to my camp at the moment. You mentioned the Legion of the Dead, so I guess it's back to Orzammar with me *sigh*
lol, Shale reminds me a bit of a certain 'protocol droid' from KOTOR. )
| PadawanMage chapter 15 . 3/6/2011
I love the story of Andraste and how she was burned like Joan of Ark. Even more interesting how all the 'priests' in the Chantry are women.
"I'm sorry, but Goldanna's a shrew," yeah, she was that. )
| PadawanMage chapter 14 . 3/6/2011
That Guardian was creepy...but I wonder what it would say to all your team members?
I got all but one of those riddles asked of me when I first went for it.
| PadawanMage chapter 13 . 3/6/2011
Argh, I remember that scene when I was going for Andraste's ashes and that dragon showed up...I didn't add two and two together and blow the horn. I have to go back and kill that beastie!
| PadawanMage chapter 12 . 3/6/2011
Ha, finally got farther into the game to actually review the next few chapters. )
I just started interacting with Zev and yeah, talk about a saucy fellow!
"I hope I don't get blood all over me again." Love that line.
| PadawanMage chapter 11 . 1/24/2011
It's said that Cailan became a man too late.
Hmm, we didn't see anything from Loghain's POV or what happened at the tower after the signal was sent.
And what is that key, anyway?
| PadawanMage chapter 10 . 1/24/2011
I really felt sorry for Jory and could kind of understand his POV...though it makes me wonder if he would've survived the Joining.
| PadawanMage chapter 9 . 1/24/2011
The last line would be so funny if it weren't for the context. /
I guess I'll have to get the Ostagar DLC as well. )
| PadawanMage chapter 8 . 1/23/2011
Calain really comes across as trying a little too hard. His head's too far into the clouds and he seems a little...effete?
I guess Anora really does wear the pants in the family, huh? )
| PadawanMage chapter 7 . 1/23/2011
Nice little backdrop with 'Al' and Daveth.
Poor Allistair, I can just see his expression when he saw Duncan riding with one other person.
| PadawanMage chapter 6 . 1/23/2011
Loghain is one of those 'villains' who does what the things are the right things but for the wrong reasons.
| PadawanMage chapter 5 . 1/23/2011
Duncan is such a great character. I'd never considered him looking at other places for recruits for the Wardens.
| PadawanMage chapter 4 . 1/23/2011
I've never read GRR Martin, but if his stuff is anything like DA, maybe I should look him up?
Another thing I enjoy in your stories: your attention to weapon detail and combat tactics.
Arl Rendon really, really, really needs to be an ogre's b*tch...
| PadawanMage chapter 3 . 1/23/2011
Ooh, looks like 'Alice' is a little minx! )
yeah, the 'persistent gore' is a little laughable.