Reviews for Something of Value
Nyrihaz chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
Oh, wow. This was remarkably well written. The whole story played out like one of the first episodes to the series, before "The Trasformation". All the character's voice were spot on-I particulary like Olivia, you caputered her broken courage beyond well. The bathup scene presented how affecte Liv is by everything-something that sometimes is hard to see with her.

Walter was brilliant ] Pink Snorkel haha ]

And the interaction between Peter and Olivia was very in character ]

"His smile turned warm, and she forgot to inhale. "Ding ding ding," he said quietly." -Good line. Oh, and I love the distinction between ghostJohn and realJohn. Nice touch.

All in all; great fic ]

Sincerly,

Nyrihaz