Reviews for The Mission: Save Private Ryan
GnCdwll chapter 13 . 7/19/2017
good writing, except for the MARY FUCKING SUE of an oc you have. Major turn off. and too much pda for a war story!

tho i like their brotherly bond and the reiben/oc/jackson love triangle, tho i hope it was a subtle affection :P
Eugene's sizzuhs chapter 13 . 6/24/2017
I do realize that this fic was written almost 7 years ago, but if you're still here, I'd love if you'd finish this story.
random guy chapter 13 . 7/14/2016
Could u finish off the story as i have really gotten into it and would really like to see the ending pleade
Rhianna 1704 chapter 13 . 5/6/2016
Please continue writing this
Guest chapter 13 . 4/24/2016
Please update or I might die
Love.Fiction.2018 chapter 13 . 4/26/2016
loved it.
LilyMalf23 chapter 13 . 10/28/2015
I just found this story and it's amazing! I truly hope you'll update sometine!
Guest chapter 13 . 10/23/2014
My gosh, you have to continue! It's sooo good
Lyanna Arwen Narsilia chapter 13 . 6/11/2014
great story! please continue and finish!
Guest chapter 13 . 5/19/2014
How could you leave readers hanging so far into the fanfiction?
Avril chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
Hope you can finished it! I really loved it! ;)
iinactiveuser chapter 13 . 10/31/2013
Okay. I just want you to know that I want you to continue writing this. I want you to continue even if I know half of them are going to die. :/ I'm so stupid. :D

Anyway, I really enjoyed this because the romance is UP already and you have more than 10 chapters Hooray! You see, I normally see around 9, 11 and some 22, 36 but the romance is just starting and it's barely into the story yet! So I'm glad this one is up to here now. :D

I really hope you can update AS SOON AS YOU CAN. I really need more of this. I have seen many OCs but not all of their stories are complete and some of them are paired with Reiben. I only want JACKSON! Well, Reiben can't hurt but where's the awesome sniper? :/ And sometimes, the sniper dies. Well, in some, he lives but he's not paired with the girl. :C

Sincerely (hoping for an UPDATE),

PS: Caps Lock was for getting your attention and for emphasizing certain "words". :3
iinactiveuser chapter 6 . 10/31/2013
Hey, I just wanted to let you know that I am extremely pleased with your story. :D There sure is a twist because Chrissie is already Jackson's girlfriend so I'm happy It's not like most of what I've read. Sure, she joined the army as a guy but not many made her out to be Reiben's best friend (?) and Jackson's already girlfriend. ;D So, cheers!

Besides that, you also just write out the dialogues in the story and you left some out. You don't put much detail into what's already known so I'm thankful. I get tired of reading the same conversation over and over. I think I might just memorize it! O.O

Miguel chapter 13 . 9/2/2013
Great story so far, please review!
Guest chapter 3 . 2/18/2013
absolute feminist shit
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