|Reviews for Death's Design, Fate's Plan|
| fdean80090 chapter 10 . 8/23
Please finish. I have really enjoyed the line you have taken with this story.
| steve.moore.9081323 chapter 10 . 7/12
Please can we have some more
| hunzbookwyrm chapter 10 . 6/28
Love the story so far hope to see the next chapter soon
| FotoDi chapter 10 . 6/25
Awesome. You have crafted very detailed arguments for the total denouement of Albus' House of Cards. It's quite brilliant.
| lilashannah chapter 10 . 5/29
Absolutely loving the story. I hope you come back soon. I'm dying to know how everything turns out
| The Good Child chapter 10 . 5/6
This story is awesome!
| starie78 chapter 10 . 5/4
A wonderful story, I hope you eventually continue it.
| Currshee5016 chapter 10 . 4/7
| desireejones99 chapter 9 . 4/4
an amazing story, with so much going on, hope that you have some new chapters on the way
| desireejones99 chapter 4 . 4/4
Wow so happy I found this again, definitely worth a second read through
| Banner chapter 10 . 3/28
I just found this story, and I spent the day reading it straight through. I am deeply enjoying the characterizations, and I love the "Family first" themes.
| Ranmaleopard chapter 10 . 3/13
This is just really awesome I can't wait for more
| MyEdwardJacob chapter 10 . 2/14
The only feedback I can give is the going back and forth on 1st person and 3rd person. It would be best to stick to one and usually 3rd offers the best method I've seen in your writing style. Otherwise please update soon.
| sortofbored chapter 10 . 2/9
Great so far. Hope to see more soon.
| Darkangel665 chapter 10 . 1/17
I wish there was a thumbs up button you can press when you really have nothing to say beside awesome story. But please update.