Reviews for Entwined
andrewpine chapter 13 . 1/23/2020
You seem to have stopped writing the first sequel . did you just lose interest of what?
andrewpine chapter 11 . 1/23/2020
I wonder how much Ronald enjoyed Fleur's right hook?
Those two are so stinking cute tigether.
andrewpine chapter 8 . 1/23/2020
It always did amaze me that Harry goes from barely being able to do a summoning spell to defeating V figure.
He really is lucky he has Hermione watching his back or the series would have ended at a shortened version of Goblet of Fire.
andrewpine chapter 5 . 1/23/2020
I don't guess she will have to worry about avoiding her all year.
Glad to hear you won't be changing the story behind those two being together.
Cannot wait to see if Ronald makes an ass of himself as usual.
Tsurugi chapter 2 . 12/13/2019
Ok...had to stop here to review. So far, I like this fanfic, and I'm pretty excited to see what's to come, but I have to tell you something...Your French sucks XD . Sorry, had to say it. Not to insult you, I just found it funny. I told my sis to read the part were you wrote in French, and she laughed her life. Anyway, had a good laugh, so ty for the chapters~

Ps: my sister never laugh
Aekiv chapter 1 . 10/29/2019
This was a lovely read! The way their relationship developed felt natural and sweet.
Draco Oblivion chapter 20 . 8/28/2019
Fleur's horror at her slightly possessive fear and the applauding at their goodbye... they were just so wonderful! 3
Draco Oblivion chapter 19 . 8/28/2019
Have to admit to feeling awe at such passionate love. Also this felt like a new traumatic note to the whole event. Watching the conflict on the other side of the maze, not knowing what's going on other than that there seemed to be an aggressive wizard loose amongst the champions. First a stunner, then the imperius and then Harry clutching a corpse. Then Amos... Wow, was brutal.
Draco Oblivion chapter 18 . 8/28/2019
If you hadn't already said you plan to follow canon as if the two had been together throughout I would be sooo worried about the death flags Fleur's whipping around.
Draco Oblivion chapter 17 . 8/28/2019
That was a really sweet way to end the chapter after all that toxicity. I want to like Mrs Weasely but believing the slut shaming ravings over her son's best friends' general character is sooo disappointing.
Draco Oblivion chapter 16 . 8/28/2019
Guess it's kinda sweet when a couple is irrevocably and unquestionably a unit to the point that anything told to one is assumed and accepted to be told to the other. Still kinda iffy about it though, not sure that being in a relationship means you have to share all secrets told with each other...
Draco Oblivion chapter 14 . 8/28/2019
Aw so Hermione's replacing Gabrielle. Guess it gives Harry a better reason to grab Fleur's stolen prize, less noble but more drama for Skeeter to use. Kinda feel bad for the little sis being ditched so easily though, they were cute in canon.
Draco Oblivion chapter 11 . 8/28/2019
Have to admit to being a tad disappointed that, after the questions of if any knew about Hermione and Fleur, Krum didn't turn around and say "I did". Loved him and Fleur getting protective of Hermione in front of Ron though, kid can be such an idiot; and of course the leading couple are as wonderfully perfect as ever.
Leni chapter 21 . 8/8/2019
I read this heartwarming story more than three years ago and I still revisit it. How could I not? It's a pleasure to read this sweet, tender, carefully-written piece. Thank you for giving us reliable role models and showing us how natural, right and fulfilling a lesbian relationship can be. I hope the Muse visits you sometime and you present us with the rest of this wonderful saga.

Thank you for this.
Sparring Woodpecker chapter 13 . 6/25/2019
The reason I'm an awful person to pick on is that I'm the kind of person who if that article was written about me would be like 'cool, I'm gonna get this free poster' and would tell Malfoy that like 'can I keep this coupon?' and would actually go ahead and do it. I get that it's not really in character for any of them to do that but it would have been funny if Hermione had. What would the poster have been of? Just the triwizard champions? Or Hermione with them?
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