great update i can't wait to read more

lovely! and it seems like your gabrielle is already on the path of becoming a good character in my book!

Gabrielle is funny I like her hahaha, good chapter guess they met before her fourth year and she remembers something ); what fun are they gonna have? hhmmmm...?

I'll be waiting for the next chapter keep going you're doing great D

I'm already in love with this story. Update soon please! I haven't read a really good femslash HP or even a good Fleur/Hermione in so very long. I'm excited!

i love your pace in the chapters. you get to the interesting parts but you don't rush.

I always love the stories where Hermione visits France.

can't wait for more.

Lol Way to go Gabrielle. If it weren't for her. Fleur and Hermione may not have met so quickly. I thought it was adorable Gabrielle clutching her paintbrush. I thought it was funny Fleur said she had a lot of school work. Then when she hears about Hermione, she drops everything to spend time with her. I'm guessing Fleur knows that Hermione is her true love? Will Fleur's patents meet Hermione? And vice versa? I want to see what happens next. Please update soon. :)

Thanks so much

Hrm, wouldn't it be simpler for Hermione to just ask the hotel staff for a pen? Aren't pens and notepads usually provided as a courtesy in hotel rooms to begin with?

Would "batty" be a word that a non-native English speaker would use? Just wondering...

Ahahaha, tiny!Gabrielle is sooo cute. I want to pinch her cheeks.

Also, I'm really glad that when you've used French here, you've used it meaningfully. I can't tell you how sick I am of writers who are always having Fleur go "ma cherie" this, and "my cherie" that. It might be nice to have a translation at the end for the readers who have no knowledge of French, although one can infer the meanings (or use online translators).

If Hermione is twelve here, then Fleur's fifteen/sixteen? About to start her sixth year at Beuxbatons, right?

Anyway, really, really think this is promising so far. Would love to read more!

wonderful introduction! I do wonder how/if you're integrating the whole traveling in time with past hermione.

I'm very interested!

I'm looking forward to the next chapter :D

yay another Fluer/Hermione story. I love these. Even if this is the Prologue it doesn't disappoint. very well written. cant wait to see where you take this.

Great start. Love how First Year Hermione out-wits 20 year old Hermione. It's b/c the elder version is in lurve!

The dialog was well done.

Great story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter.

MORE!

nice story . please keep going !:)

Heej,

OMG that was such a cute chapter.. Definitely setting this story on alert.. Hmm.. very interesting why do Fleur & Hermione travel back in time the first place.. Hmm cant wait what happends next.

~Bye Tish