At the same time, I'm really confused. What's happening? Please more chapters!

This was an excellent beginning to what I bet shall be an intriguing story.

First year Hermione was absolutely adorable. She was a good representation of Hermione's stubborness, wit, and intellect. I adored the line "I hope this isn't a sign of things to come..." and Fleur's subsequent reaction. Very good.

Anyway, I, like all the other reviewers, am interested to see why older Hermione and Fleur travelled back to that moment in time specifically. Besides wondering why that they picked that moment, I'm also curious as to who would give them permission to do so - having permission suggests what H and F were doing was important. If in the future it isn't safe for Fleur and Hermione to be together, I can seem them spending time together in the past. Hmm... Lots of theories to be made. ;D

Not only am I eager for the previously stated questions to be answered, but I cannot wait to see how you develop your H/F romance. It is definitely my favorite pairing and as this first chapter was so good, I imagine you are going to write it splendidly.

Very good start.

-Chelsea

really like were this is going! more soon please :D

Gosh, this is good. I think the ending was really sweet for Fleur to say that; I can even picture it in my brain! Wonderful writing.

Ah, interesting! The older pair interact adorably, and even 11-year-old Hermione is adorably precocious. Can't wait to see where this leads.

wow

very good :)

im excited to read more

I really, really love the concept of this story (or is it chapter?). Very cute, to be sure. Well done, also. Your style of writing is concise and quite pleasant to read, which is more than most might say - congratulations on your new wind.

This seems like a really good story on creation and I hope you update soon. I wonder why they were on that moment of time, though. Having the two Hermiones talking and Fleur's reaction to them was pretty fun and sweet. Good idea there :)

Brilliant start! Fresh, new and intriguing. :D I'm hungry for more!

Love the interaction between the characters. And Fleur/Hermione are just so sweet together. Gosh.

I suppose you will be playing out young Hermione's experiences right? Can't wait for fourth year :D

Cheers,hope to see another good chapter up soon. I'll be waiting xD

damn that was cool! nicely done )

Keep writing

Oh WOW! That was great! It was so sweet and romantic. I especially loved near the ending when Fleur talks to a young Hermione about a little french girl waiting for her princess. I'm dying to find out what happens next. Please update soon. :)

Thanks so much

I'm really loving this and your writing sytle. I'm very excitied to read the next chapter.

:D

Excellent concept! Though I have to wonder why it's this particular night they've decided to go back in time...or more appropriately why they even wanted to go back in the first place! It's a romantic scene!

I love how natural Older!Hermione and Fleur are, they are very sweet, and their interaction with young!Hermione was cute. Your characterizations are great, Older!Herm seems to be more relaxed and younger!Herm is just as stubborn as we remember.

Great opening chapter! And I have to admit, you've got me hooked off the start...

Interesting! Really interesting. I'll keep and eye on your story seems good right now D