|Reviews for Falling|
| Lecidre chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
So sad and heartbreaking... Although the movie has a happy ending, I still feel sad for Megamind whenever I recall the rain scene. You surely captured the characters' emotions and the sad atmosphere perfectly well. Great job!
| Steeleafan chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
That was super intense.
| Tara-yomitorika chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
hey, i'd just like to thank you for writing this piece. It really captures my favourite not favourite part of the movie. I don't know about you, but when I saw his face, I just about cried and a big part of me had to be reminded that I was in a theatre and therefore it was not acceptable to scream 'look at his face, you stupid lady!' at the screen (I like Roxanne, I really do, but that made me MAD!). Anyways, I'm rambling. Great piece, pleased to have read it! Best, TY
| SweetFirefly chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
Really nice! I love these fics that offer an inside view of the canon events, especially when the fandom is a movie. You captured the feeling of that scene pretty well! Sorry for not giving you a better feedback, I'm really sleepy right now, but be sure, it is awesome!
| indigofireflies chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
This was excellent. D: Your poetic descriptions sent the feeling he must've had straight home. I'm with you - before I saw Megamind, fanfiction and such were merely things I had delighted in at 12, but now, I'm even reading it on my cellphone. How sad is that? :P
Keep writing. :D You have a talent for emotion, and I can't wait to read more. :3
| Midnight Fearie chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
Layla: this story is soo...perfect...
Jazz: I agree. To me, it perfectly captures how he felt during this scene
Aqua: we loved that moment, and for the first time in a while, we actually felt the characters true pain-a pain that we could only truly feel and understand after reading this
Kelsey: normally, we are out of control and crazzi, but something about this...we just wanted to show you how much we loved this. thanks for writing!
| Dragon's Lover1 chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
Wow. You did great capturing that moment, and very nice use of metaphors, I must say.
| Captain Anemone chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
Oh. Wow. This story was exactly what I've been looking for since I first clicked on the link to the Megamind category. You are very right, I hadn't read a fanfiction on here yet that fully and accurately captured the utterly broken look on his face. Until now. Your analogies were great, the structure was nice, it didn't feel repeditive, and most importantly it had the right emotion. It really felt, upon reading, like you were with him, as aposed to the more common style of fanfiction where you are simply told what they feel. I guess I would describe it as the difference between seeing the color blue, and seeing the word blue. I really just felt like this showed a look into him, as aposed to dragging his feelings out into harsh light to inspect and pick apart.
Wow, I kind of went off on a tangent there.
Anywho, thank you SO MUCH for this, and keep it up!
P.S. I apologize for any grammatical errors, I wrote this on a Nintendo DSi touchscreen. :/
| NightmareBeforeChristmasFreak chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
This is so nicely written. Despite how short this scene is I love how you've really drawn it out. Great fic.
| Raven Morning chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
I read this over at lj, and I still love it. I hope you write more!
| ForeverACharmedOne chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
Wow, that was incredible. You really got that scene down. Which is a good and sad thing. haha. Nice to read something from you again. :)
| MissKeith chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
Well you nailed it. Very moving
| Noelle-M chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
This was really well-written! I could feel how sad he must have felt! Kudos to you! :)
While you're at it, go pat poor Megamind on the back for me. ;)
| ElfMaidenOfLight chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
wow. like a kick to the face, that was. I agree about the rain scene- it was very powerful. great work! hope you write more!