|Reviews for Terra Johnson and the Guardians of Camp Halfblood|
| ilGyhs chapter 4 . 12/25/2011
Wow, this is pretty good. Really interesting.. you should update.
| xXxDaughteroftheKingxXx chapter 3 . 1/22/2011
Hi, I love the idea of the story. The prophecy was great.
However, I did have a bit of trouble reading the story. My suggestion to you is: when a person is talking, space it out.
"Terra, you are a child of many broken promises and lies. You are in great danger, and only an Olympian god can protect you. Terra, do you understand what those symbols meant?" Chiron asked after setting me down in a chair.
"Well, I know the trident meant Poseidon, right? And the bag was Aeolus? That's all I know." I said slowly.
"Terra, the flower meant Persephone. That means Hades is going to unleash all his fury on you. The fireplace meant Hestia. Terra, most of the Olympian gods are now your enemy just because of your heritage."
I slept uneasily in the big house that night.
Other than that and a few punctuation & capilization errors, it was pretty good!
| Percy obsessed chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
Omg that's my name only both first and last are spelled little differently
| pennilee chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
This story should be longer, and in the summary, there are too much capitals. You don't need that much. Grammar... it needs to be good.
~CorruptionToday P.S. I'm doing it gently, just so you know.