|Reviews for Fairy Tail: The Family Arc|
| Shy Hear chapter 2 . 3/3/2014
Love your story!
Please update soon!
| Lunastea chapter 2 . 1/4/2014
Please please please update! Your story is really good and I want to read more of it.
| Music-chan loves anime chapter 2 . 10/7/2013
Hurry and write more please!
| darknessbloodprincess chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
| darknessbloodprincess chapter 2 . 8/3/2013
Poor kaito but the good news is that now he has a new mommy who cares for him.
| Sexly sango chapter 2 . 7/22/2013
awww poor kaito hes so cute luce is so going to take care of him cant wait to see wat happens next
| mayzzzy chapter 2 . 3/12/2013
I like the story, but there are two things that are bugging me...
1. You said that Kaito had a 'tatoo-like' thingy on his right eye. It bugs me because I'm wondereing if he has some sort of connectionto Jellal or Mystogan.
2. It's Gray, not Gary.
But great story!
| Fedski chapter 2 . 12/13/2010
! i can't wait to see what happens next!
| Persephonae chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
Your premise for there story its very intriguing! I enjoy the thought you put into your characters like Lady Lee :) I'm interested where you are taking this. Especially with a new spirit!
Some spelling issues that made some parts difficult to understand at times (ex: quiet vs quite, has vs as), though some would not be caught by spell check (oh, the joys of that program). I do suggest when you switch between speakers, make it a new paragraph, so its obvious who is speaking.
Now, though, I'm curious about Lucy's new, hard earned key as well as the guild's reaction to her solo mission. What will Natsu think? Who is Lucy's boyfriend? Keep writing!
| logicat chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
cant wait to see where you take this..
did you mean Natsu..when Lucy said she was taken?