Reviews for Temptation Waits
CrystleIceFire chapter 1 . 4/27/2012
Love it, usually I don't like lemons but this was perfect it wasn't just about the lemon it had a deeper meaning and purpose to it. You portrayed everyone perfectly and I really love this, it's great! :D
The SPAZtastic Lawlrus chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Wow! This was absolutely fantastic, and intense. Excellent, great job! You are a very skilled writer.

I especially loved this line: "Protecting his sin from the cold and judging eyes of the moon." How poetic.

Anyways, keep up the good work!

-Spaz
Grady the Asha'man chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
That was...it was...AMAZING! I hope you write more fics like this. God job.
PhantasienFreiheit chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
Oh my goodness! it's amazing! And /I/ gave you inspiration for this fic? It's amazing! And the whole ending is cool, and I like it! I'm thinking of doing another FIC dedicated to this lovely couple, so keep in touch!

Phanny.