Reviews for Why Her?
panthersclaw chapter 1 . 8/5/2014
Amazing! If they actually made this as a scene between Asuna's death and the funeral scene, I would probably start to cry as well. This is very well written, and you can feel Ayaka's pain and shock at the fact that Asuna, who she considered her best friend despite their fighting, was gone.
whointheworldwouldbelievethat chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
This made me cry :'] it is soo heartbreaking! And great at the same time!
Naomi Takahashi chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
yeah

very sad...
OfSunsetsandCarcrashes chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
This was very sad, but I could totally picture Ayaka doing that. She may hide her true feelings well, but there's always something that gives her away.
Ascoeur chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
Thank you so much ;_; Very wonderful piece.

I always wondered how everyone found out...

Hope you write more!
Rei Sagara chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
I loved it! I started to tear up a bit myself. I'd have to say that writing tragedy stories seems to be your specialty. Nicely done!

~Rei
jen1490 chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
Oh goodness! I loved it! I was starting to tear up, too. I could feel the pain ayaka felt. I also liked how you described Negi when he was panicing. Very good job!