|Reviews for Unintended|
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
Awesome! you've managed to turn such a brief snapshot of the scene into a beautiful story. I really hope you continue with this because its so cute :)
| xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
I really liked this one too! You write so well! I really liked the reflections on his past with Julia. You really get into his head. Something I am jealous of as a fellow Eli-fanfiction-writer. It just comes so naturally to you. I really admire your writing. Keep up the great work. You've been blessed with a tremendous talent :)
| BGuate224 chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
i only got one word for it, kay? niiiiiiice
| Zephyr Hearts chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Oh wow, this was just so amazing D: Why haven't I ever read it? Oh wait, cause I suck *insert sad creeper face here* This was super fluffy! I loved it!
| EclareBelievr chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
| vampireAria-degrassi chapter 1 . 12/8/2010
aww cute :}
| thesidkidd chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
I loved it. So much. Write more please! :D
Also, I think you put that author's note a bit too early. It seems like it's three lines shy of the ending. Might wanna fix that! Hah.
| eclarerocks chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
awwwww! such a cute story! i love it! sequel!
ps you did the 1st person thing really well. and the song choice was like, realllyyyy perfect.
| kimberleyx chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
This was absolutely adorable! I loved it!
| adrianna chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
SEQUEL! This was so cute!
| eclarefan54 chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
Awh this was so cute, I loved it, and I think you should definitely do a sequel!
| pavingnewpaths chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
I really like this. Although i feel like Julia wouldn't be like that at all. But I really like this(:
| killrwhale chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
This story is so sweet! Loved it :)
| fiftyshadesofdevingray chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
Aw that was beautiful!- Devin
| eclaredegrassi95 chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
OhMyGoodness, that was so freaking adorable. Total win. And a sequal would be just fine with me.
P.S. You did good writing in 1st person/ Eli's POV. (: