Quite different from any other fic I've read.
I thought the punishment a bit light, but I'm the vindictive type so I would like a bigger/Longer sentence.

Good Story.

Umbridge is a mediocre witch. So mediocre that she was capable of casting a patronus, which many other adult magicals can't do, and keep it up for hours while dementors were present during her mudblood trials. Hm, doesn't really sound mediocre to me.

A bit like Pettigrew often is called a failure at magic with only one OWL in divination or whatever authors come up with. However, Riddle ordered to kill - green. No concentration on hatred of the victim, no trying to get his magic together, nothing. Just green. Instantaneously. Either Pettigrew had practised A LOT or he wasn't as weak as he's usually portrayed.

By the way, her torture of children was a crime. Putting it on the list of crimes she's tried for, just because some victims are present, is not making it look like a vendetta. It's justice. She did it, she got caught, now she must pay. However, endlessly forgiving his tormentors was driven into Harry's head early on and then constantly reinforced by Dumbledore. He's programmed not to go after people who hurt him. Like, not killing the worst dark lord in centuries, but trying to disarm him, to put him in timeout and give him another chance to repent. Or some such idiocy.

That was awesome. Great punishment.

Good

not bad but i was expecting... more. Leaving it like that was essentially a cop-out.

Dolores was not this idiot, you made her some cartoonish villain.

Very satisfying. I loved that all four remained close friends and were comfortable enough with their past relationships that they could tease each other.

Es bueno autorización pronto

First rule for corrupt/criminal officials; NEVER DOCUMENT YOUR OWN CRIMES!

Stupidity that profound should be a crime in and of itself.

Awesome story. Love the trial so glad umbrage got what was coming to her. Hermione was badass!

Wonderful!

nice story fun to read. very appropriate punishment, truly fits the crime

OMG I LOVED THIS GOOD JOB!

LOL I love it! We did NOT get to see all the Death Eaters and their sympathizers get their comeuppance in the books and that sucked. Thanks for fixing this one!

A D**n good read. Every age and person, should enjoy it!