Reviews for Enslaved
cad bookworm chapter 12 . 11/29
Please keep writing this story!
Shadowdog11 chapter 12 . 7/12
You abandoned this fic there? With as well as this was going, tiny inconsistencies with the bond and big AU changes that weren't explained aside, that is seriously surprising and supremely maddening.
Shadowdog11 chapter 6 . 7/12
An overview on what events occurred from canon in your world would be useful. For example, if second year happened as it did in canon, this is the weakest chapter possibly ever written when combined with Draco and the whole family being "forced". Just be like all the people fighting Voldietoots
Shadowdog11 chapter 1 . 7/12
I like it so far! Not sure if I've run across it before or not
Ray chapter 12 . 1/29
Hi, I absolutely love this story... I have read it many times and have adored it (and the cliffhangers!) ever since I first read it.

Thank you so much for the work you have put into it so far, and it is a pity you aren't updating anymore :( I think Vala's 'grandfather' is a Malfoy (physical features) and I am currently imagining how Lucius would feel if his father and abuser, Abraxas, came back! Hahahahhaha...
Blazeb79 chapter 12 . 5/6/2015
Very interesting story , I must admit I've been hooked since chapter 1. It is most unfortunate that you will not update. This story seems so original and u have written it well. I hope you will one day come back and finish it.
anthony.pengelly.10 chapter 12 . 2/23/2015
good hope for more
InkyReader chapter 12 . 12/19/2014
PLEASE OH PLEASE KEEP WRITING!
Hamilton chapter 12 . 12/5/2014
Please, continue the story... :-(
Guest chapter 12 . 11/28/2014
Can't believe this. You keep me up until 3:30 in the morning reading this, and I don't even find out who the heck her grandfather is. Not to mention this story hasn't been updated in two years. I was incredibly intrigued by this. I'm so sad that it's over. Do you think you could update soon? Like, Yesterday? That would be great. Thanks!
Illuviar chapter 12 . 9/16/2014
Great story! More chapters please!
shadow-kissed angel chapter 12 . 5/16/2014
Ahh cliffhanger! Really great story. I cant wait for the next chapter. Update soon!
loleo chapter 12 . 4/16/2014
Perhaps a update is following soon? Please!

I thank you for your very intriguing story and the so complicated set to the story-line. Hopefully you will write more chapters and we can read the continuing here. It is a very terrible break and I sit now here and be thinking, who is this grandfather, this bag of shit? Is he some Grindelwald? Is he a Malfoy? A leading man from Bulgaria? Or France? Germany? You let a piece falling in saying, he was not really a human, like the father of Vala. So now I am very curious who this man is. That he excells in strategy is clear, Vala had learned from him and beat up Ron and Minerva be playing chess with them. Out of the little details, he fills his followers with a deep meaning of serving him and his cause. More so as Voldemort to his followers. Who is this man and what will be the result of Valas holding back all this information from Harry?

Please, dear author, write a new update of this story...
Raven Jadewolfe chapter 12 . 4/1/2014
Are you ever going to update this story or is it just done? It's been a really good story I've been very interested in it but...
MiloWaffles chapter 12 . 1/15/2014
Dudeā€¦. you evil SOB.
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