Reviews for Lay Your Burden Down
Skimball4 chapter 1 . 4/10
When I read "sleepy McSleeperson" I laughed so hard that I snorted!
AntiqueNature chapter 8 . 9/18/2014
Woohoo! Great read! You did a great job with the writing! Very enjoyable. :)
Mklaihai chapter 8 . 8/12/2014
oh my gosh. the clown part... hahahah. Steve reaching for his gun at the sight of a clown... i'm literally dying of laughter right now, hELP.

*takes a deep breath* WHEW. loved this story, though. ;) wonderful whumpiness and bromance and it's just all fantastic. :D well done! i love these characters so so so much, and you captured them perfectly. xx
Mklaihai chapter 3 . 8/12/2014
"Do not use around concussions. Headaches may expand."

haha, this had me laughing so hard. ;) after your response to my other review, i decided to (re)stalk your stories, and i'm enjoying them immensely. fantastic writing, and gotta love the Steve Danny whump. and of course, the snark and bromance. ;D

Rosiek79 chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
You can never be too mean to the boys! Once you are prepared to give a little comfort too ;-)
JensensMisses chapter 2 . 10/17/2012
I love it!
Cc1973 chapter 8 . 5/29/2012
Vintage whumpage at its best!
Joy01 chapter 8 . 4/21/2012
Great story, I really loved it! Good old Steve/Danny whump with feelings! You did really good dealing with Steve and his Dad. Thanks!
Cc1973 chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
Brilliant story! Gets better with every read! Looking forward to your next whump creation!
Lidil chapter 8 . 11/11/2011
Damn good show.

Looking forward to reading more.
Lidil chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
Not at all.

cytpotter chapter 8 . 10/29/2011
Hahahahahahaha! That was just priceless! I LOVED it! What a absolutely wonderful story! You made me laugh and want to cry for our 2 hero's! Thank you for the wonderful read! Though I couldn't help imagining Steve shooting the clown! (like Booth did off the show Bones, not sure if you ever seen it but... that is what big tough Booth did when he saw a clown! :)
ras0629 chapter 8 . 9/9/2011
omg that was hilarious i could definately see danny doing something like that to steve. poor steve! i would have freaked out too if a clown was behind me. actually i have freaked out on a few occations when there was a clown close to me :( stupid haunted houses :(
wotumba1 chapter 8 . 8/9/2011
LOL nice day out
wotumba1 chapter 7 . 8/9/2011
LOL definitely
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