Please update

I really wish you'd comeback.

I think Jasper is a horrible mate he left her unprotected because obviously Peter and Charlotte sucked at protecting her. So Jasper is failure as a mate as far as I am concerned. He really didn't seem that up set to me.

good story update soon

Now you need to make a fan fiction of this fan fiction for when Jasper brought Bella with him to the Cullen’s place when she was little so Rose can raise her. I don’t honk Rose could of been a great Mom!

uh-oh, Bella's goin to be pissed when Jasper tells her what he's planning! love the story so far, can't wait to see what happens next! Hope you update soon!

Hope you will come back to this story.

Well charlie too the news pretty well. Not sure how i feel about a Kate and Charlie pairing.

This story has a lot of potential. I am sad thst it was never finished but I am willing to read what you have and hooe it at least ended at s good spot.

You should write more of this please i won't to know more and what happens this is so freaking good so please update me on more.

This a great story I hope you finish it because you did a Great job so far? I read to chapter 9

hi, I like your story. it's very original, I think you could do a lot with it. I really liked the ''egg downer'' comment jasper made, you should try life bringer, anyway keep it up :)

Wow...I am really enjoying this! Will you be picking this back up at some point and finishing it?

I Luv it,
Pllllllzzzzz update sooooon

update