Reviews for Friend
serena23 chapter 24 . 3/9
Please, please, please continue your story! I love what you have wrote and hope you will consider continuing to update your story!
Blunacy14 chapter 24 . 11/5/2017
Just read this story as quickly as I could as I couldn't put it down! Damn the feels are really getting to me right now! Absolutely fantastic work slouchy it's not finished. I really cared for the characters and was nearly in tears at points! Seriously the harry and family interactions were done amazingly especially the last bit with Harry Kelly and Gibbs!
Rae chapter 24 . 7/7/2017
update please!
FredWeasleyWillLiveForEver chapter 24 . 10/19/2016
I like the story it is really great please continue with it
dullkatelyn1 chapter 24 . 5/19/2016
plz more
TheAwesomeUs chapter 12 . 12/27/2015
I really like the story but I was wondering about the adoption policies; you state that by law Harry has to be placed with a British family, but that is untrue. International adoption is popular in the US and residency isn't required to adopt from the UK (residency that the Gibbs family would have if Jethro was deployed). I also feel like it's a bit unbelievable that the Gibbs family would decide to adopt after knowing Harry for a couple of hours.
jeanette9a chapter 15 . 1/4/2015
reading this fanfic, i got an idea from it. you see they mentioned american muggle food and i like thought: well if ron like it that well you could tell your parents... mrs. wesely would probably be a pro at couponing.
M.L chapter 24 . 1/3/2015
Ok, I really like the story, it's a nice blend of realistic and magical, but there is one thing that bothers me, and that is Gibs. Your Gibs seems…almost completely uncaring. I mean, yes, when something happens then there are hugs and what not, but otherwise? You barely mention his relationship with his children. And when he is mentioned, it's in a bland, devoid of feelings letters. He might as well not exist. There is also the fact from a very sharp minded, protective person you turned him into a person who not only doesn't react when his son is in danger (I cannot imagine him not being angry and worried about trolls, bludgers, attacked students, not visiting Hogwarts with Harry being unconscious and Minerva would never hide things like this) but into a person who somehow doesn't react to his daughter being clearly depressed. And it was very clear from what you wrote. It's like you focused so much on Kelly, Shannon and Harry's school life that Gibbs stopped existing and holding any kind of importance. He just appears when adult is needed. I don'y get it.
Netchka chapter 24 . 12/26/2014
Great story. Looking forward to reading more.
Netchka chapter 13 . 12/24/2014
Yeah! Harry is away from the Dursleys.
POPCORN chapter 24 . 12/12/2014
OMG DEPRESSION, WHY OH WHY!
Matthew Bigham chapter 16 . 10/14/2014
Don't you dare let Shannon Gibbs die or even think of killing her off she is such a positive influence on Harry and he needs a good mother figure in his life.
Matt Bigham chapter 13 . 10/13/2014
Good Riddance I say the hell with the dam Dursleys they should rot in hell
Matt Bigham chapter 10 . 10/13/2014
I know you have already wrote the next chapter and most likely have decided on what is going to happen to Shannon and Kelly but I believe Gibbs is a very loving man for a U.S Marine and personally I've always hated the Durseley's as they are white Trash and they don't deserve to live let alone breath especially for beating poor Harry Potter.
Niobel chapter 24 . 6/19/2014
just notice that the chapters are like words to a song that's cool cant wait till next chapter
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