Reviews for Free
pyro the vixen boy chapter 1 . 2/19/2016
I say I break your story so far nine or eight and a half out of 10 your character development was fairly good could use a little bit more on the blonde guys boyfriend descriptions of character was good Current I gave us a general idea of what I look like but then left enough room for us to fill in the rest with our imagination same goes for the scenery and settings
Jam chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
Very interesting... I like it! Please do continue this fic :3
Zapheq chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
...I really like this so far~ It's paced well and I find that your writing style is pleasantly refreshing. Lovely piece - I do hope to one day see this continued. c:
The Emcee chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
You should totally update soon because this story is pretting interesting. I like it. You did a good job. I hope the next part is just as awesome if not more so n_n
deleted112216 chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
I really liked this first chapter. It was cute in several ways, and I can't wait for the next installment. :)
DarkAuraWolf chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
I can't believe I'm your first review, but please please please keep going. It's really suspenseful, and I like it a lot :) I never review stories, but this one got to me- and I love your writing style.

Ps: Minaki's a big meanie :(