Reviews for Of Mathematicians and Lizards
Guest chapter 1 . 5/9/2015
Perfect justice to the movie! Adorable! I love it!
Cecelia.Lunette chapter 1 . 12/30/2014
It's absolutely adorable!
It's a wonderful addition to the Tangled universe.
sarista wow chapter 1 . 4/27/2014
Such a sweet piece!
ElsaLuver chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
I loved it! It was so cute:)
Person chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
That was sooooo cute!
Evani chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
shahanshah chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
Well, this was fun.

The writing is very straightforward, so there isn't much nuance to it, which is fitting for the viewpoint character. You capture the tone of innocence very well. Short and sweet.

From what I understand, Tangled takes place in a medieval setting. Pascal lived in the 17th century. I am a party pooper.

Wait, I found things to critique.

" she said knowingly"

Just "said" works fine. This kinda blended in with the rest of the story because the rest of the story is also told in this straightforward manner, but it's obvious by the italics exactly how Rapunzel is saying her dialogue, so the adverb is unnecessary.

Write more HTTYD fic! It will amuse me more. Well, write whatever you want, but know that some nobody on the internet will be more amused if you write HTTYD fic.
Corovera chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
This is adorable! The characterization seems right - I can picture Rapunzel being like this as a kid.
RandomNumbers523156 chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
Wow, it's quite understanble how Rapunzel came to be so smart (the only kid I remember doing things like this was John Stuart Mill, he knew Classical Greek and Latin at 8), though it must be hard for her to make friends, and I liked how Disney turned Pascal into a cute thing (for some reason, I like reptiles). This fic is short and I can't see any problems, good work!
thebluninja chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
D'awwww ... though my filthy mind instantly went to "Pascal wrote a book called 'Penises?'" It's very cute and I like it.
yay chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
This is pretty cute.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
Hey, just pointing out that the Kingdom actually has a name! There's a map a the end of the movie and I paused he credits to see it. It's called Ringdorn, and the capital city on the island is called Corona. Or Carona, or something like that, the font was fancy. But yeah, back to reading you amazing story here
XMissxHallawayX chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
COOL STUFF! I love this! I didn't even know who the hell Pascal was aside from being the chameleon. . Thanks for this!
TheEverHummingGirl chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
That was really cute. Little Rapunzel is adorable!
Sharp Like A Sphere chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
This was adorable. It was an absolute charming story, and I am so glad that I read this. It brought a huge smile to my face. No kidding. In other words, thank you for writing this fun, yet simple one-shot about how Rapunzel and Pascal met.


Oh, what was that, you ask? Well, it's me adding this story to my favorites. :)
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