|Reviews for Family|
| RhodaBush chapter 1 . 12/9/2014
I would love to see more of this as a longer story!
| Polly chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
Ahaha! I loved it, this was brilliant
| PFChang'sChaiAppleCobblerIsYum chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
| MadamRedLady chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
Omg I love this story! So much!:)
| Darque Hart chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
This is fabulous! It's wonderful to see Harry and Dudley getting on, but the poor Dursleys ... they might have one in the family! Another one for St. Brutus'.
| dreamersrequiem chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
I love this. As always, I love your charactersation of the next generation, and you always bring 'lesser' characters from the novel to life. Dudley is very much how I would imagine he'd turn out, and I think its interesting that he's 'worried' about his son turning out to have magic. I love that idea. Anyways, yeah, great one-shot, I really enjoyed reading it.
| Bottled Sunshine chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
I like it! Very well done, and I hope you post another chapter to this :)
| Il'Diko chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
I think this is the beginning of a wonderful chaptered fic! ;)
Were you inspired by 'Dudley's Memory'?
Loved the characterisation and dialoge. Lily was a wonderful kid, but something is with her... does she lack magic? I always enjoy reading your Harry and Ginny, you make them function, and they are SO normal. Ginny is a real support for him.
Dudley was very likeable. I especially loved the scene when he said he didn't really believe in magic, because he doesn't see it... after living together with Harry for years... it's a nice portray of human beeings. :)
Nice fic Firts Year!
| iMissHP chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
It's a really great story. It's natural and flows weel. I love how they both grew up, but we can still relate them to their younger character. Also, I love your Lily. She puts light in this fic and I think she made the encounter become interesting. I doubt Dudley would have admitted it for his younger kid if she hadn't been there.