I am definitely interested. I feel so sad for Bella already and everyone else too. Can't wait to see where this story goes.

You have definitely got my interest. Very intriguing. Looking forward to reading more.

Thanks for writing.

Kellie

xoxo

yes you should continue! you already have my heart aching for her... And OMG! The end of that chappy? I have to read more.. I HAVE to.. :]

Xx. Roza 3

I am speechless...I was in tears. I can not wait too read more. Good

Job sister!

Go for it - putting story on alert.

Oh yeah, interest piqued! Please continue...

My interest is definitely piqued, I love some sad stories... on occasion... Thanks for writing!

You first chapter is amazing! I am completely intrigued and I can't wait to read more.

I love how heartbreaking this looks like it's going to be. Bella's sick and Edward is dead? Damn, it can't get much more angsty than that! I can't wait to read more of this. Great plot to tear my heart to pieces.

Whoa. This story just sucked me right in. But i am so confused at the same time. I can't wait to see where you take this. it's... interesting.

And i have a question... what's 'phenomena'? is it supposed to be pneumonia?

If I'm not the first to review, I will be all kinds of sad and inconsolable. I love the premise and the way you've started it, wifey. I'm already so sad for Bella and I cannot wait to see how this story unfolds. And I'm ecstatic that I get to beta this beauty for you!

I love you!

Ayden

As you already know, I love it! It's intriguing and just grips you right from the start!