|Reviews for harry potter and the deathly sponge|
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/18/2018
Awful. That was all one long, incomprehensible sentence. You really need to proofread your writing. Make sure it makes sense and make it more than one run-on sentence.
| annebeth hermione tyler chapter 2 . 5/23/2013
| Night-Waker chapter 2 . 1/3/2013
Remember, quotation marks are your friends.
| Eagle chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
You hurt the English Language! Go sit in the naughty corner!
PS:This made no sense due to having hardly any punctuation. Please, please delete this for the good of humanity.
| thepieslayer chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
I got lost at "the" Please improve.
| Kara4398 chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
Ummmm. You might wanna try a different language and a little less beer cuz thes wad orrabel.
English and alcohol really ain't your thing...
| StarWarsGeekie chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
this was so funny! i was laughing the whole time!
| Cartoonatic55 chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
TROLL IN THE DUNGEON! TROLL IN THE DUNGEON! TROLL IN THE DUNGEON!
Seriously man, were you trying to make no sense whatsoever with this?
| Third Kind chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
...What did I just read? I'm sorry, but I completely lost it by the 1st sentence. XD