Reviews for Michael Corleone
Kels93 chapter 1 . 3/22/2015
Such an amazing essay! You put into words what I want to say!
You chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
Go shoot yourself. This is shit.
Forbidden Moons chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
My thoughts exactly. Oh, gods, I love Michael too much right now! And truthfully, I don't care how long it will last. I just want to cherish it while the fire still burns! Ooooh, Michael, I...
cjh chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
Great story. You have captured the true essence of Michael Corelones character. I hope to read more stories written by you.
Felicia chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
Lovely essay. The only thing I disagree with isn't that Michael isn't just like his father, he's worse. There is no way Don Corleone or Sonny for that matter would have ordered the hit on Fredo.
Anne Oying chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
Wow. Until now I'd thought that Michael was pretty much indescribable - but this is just... so accurate and... wow. I could pretty much see his face on the page, it was almost more vivid than some of the passages in the book! :D
criminalxxxmindsxxxfreak chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
Beautifully written and incredibly accurate. As close to perfect as I think you could get :) Great job!
CarbonGoddess chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
Love It!

Beautifully written!
Tulip Star chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
I adore it, I find it breathtaking. You really captured the appearance of MC. Amazing.
retromancy chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
Very well written! You've described Michael perfectly here. I love how much detail you've put into this.
AnvilHands chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
" can feel the icy coldness of his stare penetrate your skin, gnaw at you..."

Good stuff!
Frankierox1996 chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
this describes him very well good job ;) btw im back from my vermont but i hav 2 go back 2 school so ill talk 2 u when i hav time