Intriguing! Would really like to read more.

Interesting

Nice! I think you captured the dynamics of the triangle well, even though Merlin was cutely sleeping through it.

aw sad, what's up with the moment/you stuff?

Short but interesting insight. I like the idea of Arthur and Gwaine being the alpha males sort of setting up boundaries. While of course Merlin sleeps oblivious:-)

This is a great lead-in to whatever's going to happen next. I look forward to the next chapter.

Poor Gwaine! He is a good man and friend

So cute! Lovely little interaction between Arthur and Gwaine... D

Gawain was really kind making helping arthur and merlin even though he love merlin. merlin so would give up everything for Arthur. I still think Gawain should try hitting on Merlin though