Reviews for A Shock to the System
karenIreland chapter 3 . 8/18/2013
Absolutely brilliant :-)
karenIreland chapter 2 . 8/18/2013
I love bella! Great update :-)
karenIreland chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
Looking forward to reading more :-)
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 25 . 8/16/2013
Omg! I was laughing so hard! I remember being in labor with my kids and going through transition. I wanted to rip my husband's head off! Lol!

Loved your story!
JaspersSissy chapter 21 . 7/21/2013
i love your logic on the centimeters .lol Ive done it 6 times lol
W chapter 25 . 7/18/2013
Love it!
Patstew chapter 25 . 5/14/2013
Great story! Loved it :)
wonderfullybedazzled chapter 25 . 4/21/2013
Great labor scene! Gotta love the anesthesiologist! My boys were both C-sections...close calls.
Got teary eyes again as Edward held his newborn.
wonderfullybedazzled chapter 23 . 4/21/2013
Such a sweet proposal! Aww.
wonderfullybedazzled chapter 22 . 4/21/2013
Those were perfect ILYs!
wonderfullybedazzled chapter 21 . 4/21/2013
Loved the tickling on the feet.
wonderfullybedazzled chapter 20 . 4/21/2013
Oh that was hot! No baby cockblocking either!
wonderfullybedazzled chapter 19 . 4/21/2013
Wooing is good!
wonderfullybedazzled chapter 18 . 4/21/2013
Yeah!
wonderfullybedazzled chapter 17 . 4/21/2013
I am drawing a blank as to when Bree entered the story
Uh oh it did look like G was making his moves on B
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