Reviews for A Shock to the System
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 3 . 3/13
Oh, my! What an auspiciously horrendous start!
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 2 . 3/11
I think maybe Ang is right. Bella seems to
be a bit of a judgmental witch so far.
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 1 . 3/11
Sounds interesting.
Guest chapter 18 . 2/4
I loved that you allowed us into Edwards mind during all of this...it helped
us a little about how he felt throughout it all...BUT, it would be so much better
if you would do EPOV every other chapter or every few chapters to read his
feeling in real time...so much better!
Mrs.Lautner.Wolf chapter 2 . 1/3
I'm so annoyed by Angela it makes my teeth hurt. I know it comes from a good place but Jesus, it's almost insulting the way she keeps pushing guys on Bella. I don't think I'd be able to tolerate that in friend.
timidvampire chapter 25 . 12/31/2016
I loved this, thank you for sharing x
rosesnlilies chapter 23 . 9/28/2016
Amazing :) I'm not a fan of cussing, but even I can say this story was awesome :)
crunchinn x ice chapter 25 . 9/27/2016
loved your story!
sue1zide chapter 6 . 9/23/2016
She is very defensive and judgmental. It's as if she has her mind already made up.
Twiolic chapter 3 . 9/9/2016
LOLOLOL!
84gemstone chapter 11 . 9/5/2016
Pmsl oh Bella
84gemstone chapter 9 . 9/5/2016
Well in glad Tanya has gone I get some people have to work but I thought it might be different for Bella. No worries still enjoying the story x
84gemstone chapter 8 . 9/4/2016
Why is Bella going right back to work after only I few weeks? Wouldn't she get maternity leave or something? He work would know what's going on as Ang was taking that time off
84gemstone chapter 5 . 9/4/2016
No how could you kill them. Poor Bella and the baby. Not sure why Edward was down as family to call. I no he's a God parent so it would be in the will that Bella and Edward both look after the baby.
JustARead chapter 23 . 8/31/2016
Sweet
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