Reviews for A Shock to the System
Adavis41 chapter 10 . 5/31/2020
I love this story I have read it 4 times now and it still cracks me up and makes me cry. I would love to read esme's POV on the phone call.
Gemm13 chapter 15 . 4/18/2020
Edward is too fucking cute!
Valya 001 chapter 26 . 10/16/2019
I seriously kept on waiting...even till the futuretake, for Bella to call Cullen Edward...:-D
I was sure that at some point in story he was going to ask her to call him by name. But that never happened.
I loved this story though. It was sweet and intriguing.
Bevey99 chapter 25 . 7/26/2019
Really great f..king story. He went from asshat to awesome. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Bevey99 chapter 14 . 7/26/2019
Yum, tequila is one of most favorite things. It's pretty much the only thing I drink. The good stuff is in the freezer [the way it's suppose to be served]] calling my name. I use chili salt.
Bevey99 chapter 12 . 7/24/2019
Nope not even close. hahaha
Bevey99 chapter 11 . 7/24/2019
Oops. That might start a fire.
Bevey99 chapter 9 . 7/24/2019
NOT good. The skank needs to leave asap. Poor Bella. And fairly sure he's not a germaphobe, he's getting a little shock everything he touches her. ;-]
Bevey99 chapter 5 . 7/23/2019
Holy crap I did not see that coming. Waterworks in progress
Just Sus chapter 17 . 7/7/2019
Oh, someone is marking his territory! I think he's really serious about them having a relationship with Bella. Time for her to get on board, too...
Just Sus chapter 11 . 7/7/2019
OMG, this is hysterical!
Just Sus chapter 5 . 7/7/2019
This is devastating ! Poor Robby, poor Bella! They have no one else!
2old4fanfic chapter 3 . 9/15/2018
me
just rereading
Kopec82 chapter 7 . 8/5/2018
In a couple chapters Charlie was a live a this one you kill him
neelix lee chapter 26 . 12/4/2017
Thank you for a wonderful story, thank you for sharing.
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