Reviews for A Shock to the System |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, my! What an auspiciously horrendous start! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think maybe Ang is right. Bella seems to be a bit of a judgmental witch so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sounds interesting. |
![]() ![]() I loved that you allowed us into Edwards mind during all of this...it helped us a little about how he felt throughout it all...BUT, it would be so much better if you would do EPOV every other chapter or every few chapters to read his feeling in real time...so much better! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so annoyed by Angela it makes my teeth hurt. I know it comes from a good place but Jesus, it's almost insulting the way she keeps pushing guys on Bella. I don't think I'd be able to tolerate that in friend. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this, thank you for sharing x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing :) I'm not a fan of cussing, but even I can say this story was awesome :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved your story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() She is very defensive and judgmental. It's as if she has her mind already made up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOLOLOL! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pmsl oh Bella |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well in glad Tanya has gone I get some people have to work but I thought it might be different for Bella. No worries still enjoying the story x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why is Bella going right back to work after only I few weeks? Wouldn't she get maternity leave or something? He work would know what's going on as Ang was taking that time off |
![]() ![]() ![]() No how could you kill them. Poor Bella and the baby. Not sure why Edward was down as family to call. I no he's a God parent so it would be in the will that Bella and Edward both look after the baby. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet |